Free Will vs. Fate 我們的命運﹐殺手的故事
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Fan Fiction by Tin Tin



Character Artist
Deci Wan Suet Jessica Hsuan Suen Huen
Ice Wan Bing Jessica Hsuan Suen Huen
Edan Wong Sung Yuen Louis Koo Tin Lok
Joe Chow Kin Julian Cheung Chi Lam
Jaye Wan Wun Joey Meng Yi Mun
Rain Wan Lum Marianne Chan Mui Ying
Hang Lee Sing William Lam Ka Dong
Dylan Lam Bo Yau Steven Ma Chun Wai
Wan Seung Vivian Leung
Wan Lui Jackie Lui
Pit Wong Sung Tin Wong Hei
Tommy Lau Eric Wan



CHAPTER 12-EDAN'S LOVE CONFESSION


[in Ci Ci's room]
Ice: you completely spoke my heart.

Ci Ci[flipping pages of the bible]: you don't need a genius to figure that one. [reads directly from the bible] I revealed myself to those who did not ask for me; I was found by those who did not seek for me.

Ice: There are a lot things I still don't understand. Things that people can't always help.

Ci Ci: A patient man has great understanding, but a quick-tempered man displays folly.

Ice: will I have the energy to wait for it?

Ci Ci: Even youths grow tired and weary, and young men stumble and fall; but those who hope in the Lord will renew their strength.

Ice: yes.

Ci Ci: I can do everything through him who gives me strengh. Not everyone may be a believer of God but everyone has a God in them.

Ice: Believing does not neccessarily mean understanding or even have to be understood...carrying that mind is always the leading strengh...

Ci Ci[smiles]: where did that come from?

Ice: Quote from Wan Bing's novel of transient issues...

Ci Ci: What?

Ice: you won't hear that coming too often..don't worry.

Ci Ci: Last words of support...Learn what you must know. Stop at nothing until you have the answers. That..that for once didn't come from the great bible.

Ice: Hey, that suits my personality to the fullest....What about you?

Ci Ci: What about me?

Ice: I believe he sent Pit after you.

Ci Ci: Care to explain who's Pit? ....the same Pit that is helping you now?

Ice[nods]: What are you going to do?

Ci Ci: run away like I alway have.

Ice: he's your father, you can't run from him.

Ci Ci: Jesus once spoke, "I am the light of the world. Whoever follows me will never walk in darkness, but will have the light of life." I really believe in that, Bing. I cannot live around a life full of dimness and dreadful horror.

Ice[picks up the bible]: For the wages of sin is death, but the gift of God is eternal life through Christ Jesus our Lord. I think you have understood that more than I ever will.

Ci Ci[laughs]: at times, you end up using what I use to sent each other relieves of stress, pressure and a paused in time.


[a street in Mong Kwok....]
Old lady: let go...let go of me....

Tommy: Ah Por ah....let me help you...

Old Lady: I don't know you...what do you want? I don't have money, I'm just an old woman...

Tommy: oh god...Ah Por ah...I'm...

Jaye[comes around the corner]: Hey mister, what are you doing to that Por Por?

Tommy: Miss, it's not the way it looks...I'm

Old Lady: Miss, he's trying to take my money. help me call the cops...

Tommy: no...

Jaye: Por Por, don't worry....[to Tommy] How can you stalk a granny?

Tommy: Miss, you don't understand....

Jaye: Please leave her before I call the police...

Tommy: I am the police....

Officer[walking toward them]: Lau Sir, what's going on?

Jaye[looks at Tommy]: Ah Sir?


[outside of the police station]
Jaye: I'm really sorry...

Tommy: It's ok, it was a misunderstanding...

Jaye: You're pretty kind hearted...and that por thought you were a theft.

Tommy: I saw her having trouble crossing the streets...I guess people can be too over concern

Jaye: Especially when they are senior citizens.

Tommy: umm...where do you live? I'll give you a lift...

Jaye: It's ok...i drove too....[they split]


[minutes later...]
[Jaye walks into the building...Tommy walks in behind her..]

Jaye[turns around]: hey, Lau Sir...

Tommy: You live here?


[at night....Ice comes home]
Ice: Hi everyone...[shocked] Tommy?

Jaye: Yes, Tommy.

Ice: what are you doing here?

Edan: he's our neighbor..he's welcome anytime!

Ice: no..i didn't mean it that way...

Tommy: I have to hop back home now....nice chatting with you guys...[Tommy leaves]

Ice: So what did you all talk about? anything interesting?

Jaye: nothing to be repeated over...why did you asked?

Ice[smiles]: just curious...[sense Jaye's disbelieve]


[next day..]
Ice: Are you sure we are going the same way? I don't want to trouble you. [wants to get rid of Edan]

Edan: no...I'm quite free today...

Ice: I think I'll know my way around...

Edan: Nah, it's too risky...[they get in to the elevator...]

[Both Edan and Ice mindlessly pressed at the same time...but only pressing the wrong floor...unexpectedly, the elevator gave up on them...stopping in between floor...]

Ice[the lights went off]: oh my god...

Edan: we're stuck here...

Ice: you mean for real stuck?

Edan: I don't kid....this happens very often...use to it...

Ice[endlessly pressing the alarm button...]: how long does it usally take until they save our behind? they are not even answering....

Edan: more or less...around 2 hours....

Ice: What?

Edan[starts to sit down]: come, have a seat...before you know it...we'll be out of here!

Ice: it's easy for you to say....

Edan: you know I can get you out...break out actually...[points to the ceiling of the elevator..]

Ice: what you know, I know even better...[she points to the camera]

Edan: that's why I was only suggesting...

Ice[without alarm...her pager beeps....she reads in her mind]: oh no...

Edan: What's the problem?

Ice(Yuen is being sent to the hospital...I can't get myself out): do you have your cell?

Edan: Yes...but it can't connect in the elevator...

Ice: What am I going to do?

Edan:....

Ice[starts to cry]

Edan: I know you're not going to tell me...but how can I help?

Ice[mumbles to herself]: please be alright little guy...

Edan[trying to think something good to say that will suit any situation...]: It's going to be alright....

Ice[couldn't control her emotions, she quickly grabbed Edan to hug for reassurance]

Edan: Let it out...I'll be there for you....[couldn't control his words as well...]

Ice: you don't understand....

Edan: I don't want to understand anymore...as long as you are alright...that's all I care...

Ice: why are you so caring, to me?

Edan: I...I...[didn't know how to put it...because he himself couldn't explain the feeling...]

Ice: please don't like me..[shuttles backwards...] I have a very complicated past....

Edan: you can feel it...so you know my feelings for you....but you can't accept me?

Ice: you don't even know me..

Edan: I don't need to and I don't want to....It's been only weeks but it seems like I have known you all my life...this has never occurred to me before...I am as shocking as you.

Ice: please, I'm in the middle of a breakdown....

Edan: I don't want to pressure you with anything...it just suddenly all came out.

Ice[feels soften by his words]: why are you doing this to me, to me now? [her mother's words suddenly draws to her mind..] (Can I let go of this burden? let go of Dylan?) Will you accept my past?

Edan: I don't want to know about your past...I don't even care about you identity...

Ice[quickly embraces Edan]: what kind of person are you?? Saw Lo(crazy man), you are really a saw lo... [her pager beeps again. after reading the messae, a big smiles appears...] Everything is back to normal...(he's ok)

Edan: What about us? We are not just normal anymore.

Ice: of course not...[they embrace tightly again...]


[in Yan Oi hospital...]
Ice: rushes in...[goes over to the information desk..] I want to know if there is a Lam Yuen sent her early? He is child...

Yuen: Bing Jah [a nurse pushes him out in a wheel chair]

Ci Ci[walking beside them...]: don't get that frighten, he'll be ok...

Ice: Yuen, what happened to you? [sobs again]

Yuen: MaMa, don't cry...[whips her tears with his hands]

Ice: don't scare you mother like this again.

Nurse: it was food poisoning....but he is ok now...

Ci Ci: the doctor said he should be out of here within a few days..



[for over a month...Edan and Ice secretly went off together without letting knowledge to anyone about their location...]

[the day they return...]
Ice: Edan, bring our luggages up first...i want to get some food...

Edan: Alright...

Ice[heads to a supermarket...her cells rings]

Ci Ci[on the other line]: you're finally answering calls?

Ice: Ci, what's up?

Ci Ci: I figured a way to discover the killer who killed Dylan...[Ice drops the her cell...]








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