Free Will vs. Fate 我們的命運﹐殺手的故事
Copyright Tin Tin 2000 All Rights Reserved.
Fan Fiction by Tin Tin



Character Artist
Deci Wan Suet Jessica Hsuan Suen Huen
Ice Wan Bing Jessica Hsuan Suen Huen
Edan Wong Sung Yuen Louis Koo Tin Lok
Joe Chow Kin Julian Cheung Chi Lam
Jaye Wan Wun Joey Meng Yi Mun
Rain Wan Lum Marianne Chan Mui Ying
Hang Lee Sing William Lam Ka Dong
Dylan Lam Bo Yau Steven Ma Chun Wai
Wan Seung Vivian Leung
Wan Lui Jackie Lui
Pit Wong Sung Tin Wong Hei
Tommy Lau Eric Wan



CHAPTER 13-"I cannot be your valentine."

[in the streets....]
Rain: over a month...this vanishing habit is starting to get intensely lame...

Jaye: it's not up to us now....

Hang: at least, there's a high chance that Edan is with Deci...but on the other hand, this isn't like Edan at all.

Jaye: seems to me, no one is themselves lately...[walks ahead]

Rain: Pit, do you happen to acknowledge anything?

Pit: why are you asking me? I'm as unperceived about the situation as anyone here.

Hang: we can't really do much but to wait...

Jaye: guys, Lum and I are going that way[points]...we'll see you at home...[drags Rain]

Hang: but Jaye...

Pit: let them go...who knows what they are thinking...

Rain: Jah, why are we ditching them...

Jaye: I don't know...afterall I'm beginning to have second thoughts with everyone involved...Lum, we can never be less prudent around any other human being...my sisters are the only ones I trust, yet now I only have you...I cannot even pursuade myself to believe that she(Ice) isn't a CLONE...

Rain: how is that possible?

Jaye[raises her voice]: she ISN'T our sister...that is all I can say...

Rain: have you ever encountered the fact that Boss may have held Suet, in some way? she never did favor her...she always felt Suet was a waste of time and energy...

Jaye: until we have further evidence, this is just an assumption between you and I...we don't want anything to hinder our trust...

Rain: it's worth it...what if...

Jaye: don't say it....we cannot conclude too rapidly and infer conjectures...we have to stay persevere...Suet is going to come back to us...I don't know when, I don't know how but I know she will...

Rain: you are right...

Jaye: I received an order today...I'll be back within this week...in the meantime, keep me posted...

Rain: I will...becareful...

[in Edan's apt....]
Edan[looking at his watch every 5 second...]: another 30 mintutes have passed, where is she? [he soon grabs his jacket and leaves the apt...]

[Edan starts to dial for Ice again while walking out of the building...still waiting for Ice to pick up...oddly he hears a ringing of a another cell phone outside. He notice the exact pattern of rings...he sees the cell and picks it up...]

Edan: It's Suet's...

[somewhere in Temple street....]
Ice[driving]: Ci, are you sure this is the right place? A former middle person living in this part of town?

Ci Ci: yes, this is the only information given by Kyle...he told me to tell you, you owe him a big favor...

Ice: I know, I know...how could you ever guess to follow back the old middle person that handles orders.

Ci Ci: I told you having patients will pay off...you think better that way.

Ice: but how would you know the killer must be from my Trainers Organization?

Ci Ci: Well, it's a try...not possitive...she was the one of the very few middle person back then, while the organization was still growing...if we find her, we can confirm who was responsible for Dylan's mission...guess what, she was the A2 back then...she retired now...

Ice: I thought the address was the only info you received from Kyle?

Ci Ci: you know Kyle...excessive, talkative person...

Ice: oh yeah

[inside an apt...]
Sam[sitting the couch]: how did you two find me?

Ice: I'm sorry to intrude but this is very important to me.

[Orders her maid to let Ci Ci and Ice in...they talked for a while...]

Ice[putting away her wallet]: so are you saying, back then you gave the order to A22...

Sam: yes...

Ci Ci: why are you so sure?

Sam: because that was my last mission, the last order I gave before I went into an accident...an accident which cost me my ability to to do anything [her maid rolls her wheelchair over...]

Ice: I'm sorry...so if we find out who A22 has became into now....

Ci Ci: then that person is the killer...

Ice[stands up]: thank you for your time...I really appreciate this...

Sam: now everything is up to you, the younger generation...may God bless you....[they leave...]

[in the living room]
Yuen: Yee, I don't want to play with you. Go away. [putting pieces of a mini motor racer car together]

Sean: Let Sean Gor Gor teach you.

Yuen: no...you're messing it up.

Sean[sees Ice coming home]: Bing.

Ice[coldly]: What are you doing here?

Sean: What do you mean. I visit you guys occasionally.

Ice: You still have the guts to stand in front of me?

Sean: why is that?

Ci Ci: Is something wrong?

Ice[throws something at Sean]: don't ever let me see you again.

Sean[picks up a pistol]: What is the meaning of this?

Ice: I'll tell you...you are banned from our organization...

Mei: Bing?!

Ice: Mother, this dog don't only work for us. [snatches the pistol from his hand, staring with the most hostile eyes...]It was you who sent those men to attack me. It was you who ended up killing your own men. Am I right? Don't forget, I assigned this kind of bullet to you.

Sean[busted and speechless]

Ice: leave my sight now or you'll never have a chance to...

Mei: wait...[grabs Sean by his shirt] who is behind all this?...

Sean: Boss, I didn't want to...

Ice: don't give us that crap...release him mother...I have cleaned my hands...don't make me unclean them...[Sean leaves...]

Yuen[jumps up and down]: Yahoo! Bing Jah threw that guy out!!

Ice: Yes, you don't have to put up with his pinches anymore...Bing Jah has business to handle, you stay here and play...[Yuen goes back into his games]

[Mei, Ci Ci and Ice enters Ice's room]
Ci Ci: I don't get it, we could have forced him to expose the person behind this...

Mei: Bing has her reasons...

Ice: he's words are not trusthworthy anymore...but his actions can lead us to what we maybe looking for...we'll have someone follow him...

Ci Ci: very slick and quick minded...

Ice: we can end the praises, we have to connect with Kyle...

Ci Ci: Yes...

Mei: what is this all about?

Ci Ci: we are one step away in finding the kill...

Mei: this is about Dylan....

Ice: mother I know you have never agreed to my actions toward this whole issue but can you please be supportive for this once?

Mei: I just don't want to see you...getting hurt...

Ice: I will be even more painful if I don't find out.

Ci Ci[logging on to the internet]: Kyle is on....are you ready for this? [waiting for Kyle's response...] I asked him already...[Mei leaves the room]

[in the living room]
Mei(for all these years, I have stalled everyway for Bing not to discover the truth....I guess it is time I stop shielding her and let herself slowly into the truth...)

[not for long, Ice inconceivablely, ran out of the house...]
Ci Ci: Bing! Bing, where are you going?

Mei[stands up]: what happened?

Ci Ci: she found out who the killer was...

Mei: and?

Ci Ci: that's all and this was her reaction...

Mei: I never seen her like this, this is even worst then the time she knew about Dylan's death. I just let her know about the killer, she doesn't even know...[stops herself from talking]

Ci Ci: let her know what? Are you saying that, you already knew who the killer was all along?

Mei: I won't cover it anymore...I told Kyle to standby, to wait for Bing to find her way to him and finally let her know...

Ci Ci[shocked]: I don't understand why you did this but I know you mean the best for Bing.

Mei: but there is something I don't understand. I know you are a Christian...it's doesn't explain why you are helping Bing, to help her into her revenge...

Ci Ci: Mei Yee, you are right, I am a believer of God...but I am also a friend of Bing. I know what I am doing...I know Bing is not truly seeking for revenge but an answer and even a solution to her sleepless nights...I trust Bing, she will not kill him, who ever he(the killer) may be....

[the scene shifts to Ice's room...the camera focuses on the computer screen and a picture is showned, it was Edan Wong Sung Yuen...]







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