Free Will vs. Fate 我們的命運﹐殺手的故事
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Fan Fiction by Tin Tin



Character Artist
Deci Wan Suet Jessica Hsuan Suen Huen
Ice Wan Bing Jessica Hsuan Suen Huen
Edan Wong Sung Yuen Louis Koo Tin Lok
Joe Chow Kin Julian Cheung Chi Lam
Jaye Wan Wun Joey Meng Yi Mun
Rain Wan Lum Marianne Chan Mui Ying
Hang Lee Sing William Lam Ka Dong
Dylan Lam Bo Yau Steven Ma Chun Wai
Wan Seung Vivian Leung
Wan Lui Jackie Lui
Pit Wong Sung Tin Wong Hei
Tommy Lau Eric Wan



CHAPTER 14-"Thou shalt know the man"

Previous chapter: Ice finds out that it was Edan who killed Dylan....

[Bing, running in the rain for hours, lost and confuse, continues on running until there was no where to run. Lack of knowledge, she arrives on the street of Edan's apartment building. Edan was also wet and soak from searching for Bing.]

Edan[sees Bing and runs up to her...]: Suet!

Bing[tries to close her mind, ignores and keeps on running]:...

Edan[caught her risk]: Suet, what has happened? How could you disappear like that?

Bing[angerly pushes him; she couldn't hold back her pain, pulls out her gun...]

Edan[ in shockness]: what are you doing?

Bing[strict expression]: Please tell me you didn't do it?

Edan[shaking his head]: I don't understand. [his face started to stress was disbelieve] do you know what you are doing? you are facing a gun at me?

Rain[rushes to them with Pit]: Put down the gun... [tries to force Bing to give in her gun but was overpowered by her...]

Pit: It can't be him. Don't do anything stupid.

Rain: you know something we don't know?

Bing: How can he explain that he wasn't the killer responsible of Dylan's death. I checked, the order was passed on to him. I have prove.

Edan: What are you two talking about? [Rain is confused as well.]

Pit: no..no...are you sure?

Bing[takes out her wallet]: Look at this picture. Do you remember this man?

Edan: He looks fimilar but I really don't know who he is.

Bing: 8 years ago, my fiance was murdered by a professional killer. it was your job...

Edan[shocked]: fiance?

Bing[signs]: I am not Wan Suet... but her twin sister Wan Bing.

Rain[couldn't believe the words coming out of Bing]: Twins?

Edan[looks away and force his hands to cover his ears]: I don't want to hear this...don't tell me...don't....

Bing[continues]: You have to know... I forged her identity to find the people behind his death...

Edan: And to get revenge, am I right? You never did loved me? What happened this month was all fake...us, we are fake....you used me? [Edan couldn't take this attack, tears instantly ran down...]

Bing:.....I don't want to talk about this....please tell me the truth

Edan[to stunned from all the information, he couldn't accept; he decided to waive...]: do whatever you please...you never loved me anyway.

Bing: so are you admitting to it?

Edan[outraged]: fine, yes...i did it. Now you can kill me....[closes his eyes...]

Pit: Bing, don't do it. I know Edan will not fight back. His life is in your hands.

Edan[too sorrowed to talk, only sobs with his head down, while large drops of rain falls on to him]:....

Bing[the hand holding the gun begins to shake, this was as painful for her]

Rain: whoever you are, don't pull the trigger. You can never pray for such a man to love you like this... You will regret.

Pit[remembers]: No, you are wrong. It wasn't Edan.

Bing[feels dizzy]: I don't want to believe it but it was his mission.

Pit: 8 years ago, yes, Dylan was his target, his first mission but he never succeed. [Edan looks at Bing, to see if she believes...]

[flashback]
[in the balcony of somewhere...]
Edan[looking up to the dark sky]: Sum is my greatest regret...Sum isn't my daughter. She isn't related to anyone of us. The first order I every had, I accidently killed the wrong person, which is Sum's father when she was only an infant....i then adopted her...
[end of flashback]

[Bing finally realizes she has accused Edan wrongly, she drops the gun...she rather run away then to face Edan.]

Pit: Bing! [to Edan] Don't blame her, Dylan was killed right after she gave birth to their son. Dylan's body was never found.

Edan: she wanted to kill me....

Rain[picks up the gun and smirks]: Edan, you two are really meant for each other. [smiles] when you two decide to be more honest, I think you both would be happier. [gives Edan Bing's gun.] The gun isn't even unloaded. She never intended to hurt you, so don't even go to kill.

Pit: Be in her shoes for once... it must have been pretty tough on her to find out that you were responsible for killing Dylan.

Rain: She wouldn't stay for all the talk, could have just shot you if she didn't love you what so ever. Don't you get it?

[Ice runs in a low pace...expressing a weak image...she immediately searches her pockets...]
Ice: I didn't bring my candy...[faints to the ground...]

[in nyc...]
Kyle: your problem can't be solved by acting like this....

Joe: it's non of your concern...

Kyle[continues to follow him]: what do you mean? you've never treated me like this before...why now?

Joe[gobbles up another can of beer]:....

Kyle: stop this...[trashes his beers to the floor...]

Joe: What are you doing?

[Suddenly, out of no where, a woman's scream ran across the block....]
Kyle: aiya, who screams like that...

[Joe and Kyle runs over to a circle of people, surrounding someone...]
Bystander 1: you think she's dead?

Bystander 2: i'm calling 911 now...[dials]

Bystander 3[raises from the ground]: my god, she has no pulse....

Woman: AHHHHHH....

Bystander 1: what happened here?

Woman[hiccuping]: this woman suddenly collapsed before me...

Bystander 3: she was shot...

[Joe and Kyle leaves the scene...]
Joe: another killer on a role...

Kyle: no wonder she's called the Flasher...

Joe: what are you talking about?

Kyle: you haven't heard? Flasher...quite self-explanatory.... this new professional is on the run...she's been everyone's gossip title even since she broke out with the highest record for completing 12 jobs in a month...almost the highest record in TO

Joe: who cares....

Kyle: you asked...

Joe: I'm going to get more beer...

[in a bedroom...]
Ice[awakes]: where am I? [gets out of bed...]

Jen[enters the bedroom]: you're awake...I made food if you're hungry...DAI SO(sister in-law)

Ice: Jen? Why?

Jen: you're diabetic...you should always carry those candy...

Ice: I know...i forgot I ran out...[picks up a picture of Dylan and her] you still have this...

Jen: why did you leave?

Ice: huh?

Jen: why did you leave without a trace? Ah Gor lefted me already, you had to leave me too...

Ice: Jen, I didn't want to...I had no choice....

Jen: forget it...

Ice: where am I now?

Jen: my home...I'm roommates with Tommy ever since...since what happened to Ah Gor..you still remember Tommy don't you?

Ice: Tommy? [starts to laugh] I'm back where I lefted off...

Jen: huh?

Ice: nothing...

Jen[suddenly remembers]: I had a nephew...

Ice: don't worry, you still do....

Jen: he should be 8 by now, right?

Ice: yes

[Jaye escapes into the dark right after fulfilling another mission. Abruptly, she runs into another person...]
Jaye[quickly hides her gun]: I'm so sorry....[looks at the person and becomes startle...]

Tommy: Jaye, it's you! Why are you in such a rush?

Jaye: I, I'm on my way home...I felt someone was following me...

Tommy: really? who? [rushs about to speculate the area...] I don't see anyone... well, you shouldn't be out this late in the night...let me take you home...

[the guys settles soundlessly in the living room of their apt...eyes wandering here and there, but mouths stays unspoken...non of them can pick up the right word to break the silent atmosphere...the door knob turns...]
Edan[awakes from his stationary position with a gush of excitement; he whispers...]: Suet...no...no...[the awkward feeling couldn't make his lips spill out the right name...]

Rain: Jah?! you're home...

Edan[becomes disappointed...returns to his moodless expression...]

Hang: Jaye, you're finally back [running over, arouses in joy...]

Jaye: yes...[looks at the others]: what's wrong?

Hang[interrupts before Rain could speak...]: that woman isn't your sister...she says she's your sisters twin...would you believe it...[Jaye drops her keys... looks at Rain...]

Rain: it's true...

Jaye: what is her motive to all this? how did you all find out?

[Tommy opens the door to his apt...]
Jen: Man Gor, you're home...

Tommy: Yes...oh why did you call in for an early leave today? are you ok?

Ice[comes out from the bathroom..]: Siu Man...

Tommy[in an obscured face]: Ah So?

[minutes later...]

Jen: ....so i made her stay for the night...

Tommy: oh...but you live right across from here...

Jen: you do?

Ice: guys, let's not bring them up...

[the next day..]
Pit[comes out of the building]

CiCi[pats him]: are you Pit?

PIt[turns around]: and are you?

CiCi[surprised](it's him! he's the killer I helped in NYC...): do you know where Ice is?

Pit: she didn't come back here the whole night....who are you?

CiCi: don't worry, I know who you are...the plan and everything...I'm Kwok Yun Ci

Pit[walks together]: no need for me to introduce...the last time I saw her was when she confronted Edan...

CiCi: did she?

Pit[shakes her head]: she didn't...

Hang[shows up from behind]: nah..she only ran like a speed demon..that's all...

Pit[gives him the eye]: you weren't even there...

Hang: heard enough from you all already...and who is this pretty lady?

CiCi: call me CiCi...

Hang: CiCI...cute name...so..

CiCi: um...I'm in a rush now...

Hang: no..no let us drive you...[Pit laughs at Hang]

[drives CiCi...stops at a destination...]
Hang[drops his mouth]: what, church?

CiCi: is there a problem?

Pit: no..he didn't mean it like that...

Hang: yeah..i'm joking...

CiCi: thanks for the lift...[gets out of the car...Pit follows]

Hang: Pit?

Pit: um...I hope you don't mind...

CiCi: no..not at all...you're very welcomed to be here...

Hang: well, you two have a blast..I'm out of here...gotta surprise Jaye with her favorite congree from Sing Gay...bye bye! [drives away...]

[they walks in to the church...PIt suddens feels so free and light from the chorus of the church music...and the peaceful attention captured by the artistics of the walls...]
Pit: now I know why she use to loved the church so much...

CiCi: are you talking to me?

Pit[shakes his head]: ...[contines to look around...]

[in Tommy's apt...]
Jen: are you leaving with me?

Ice: yes...the little guy has been nagging me about going to the themeparks for weeks...

Jen: when are you going to introduce his aunt to him?

Ice: you have work today...

Tommy: Jen, we have to leave now...

Ice: next time ok...

Tommy: let's go girls...[he opens the door for them..]

[Edan closes his apt door....Ice and Edan finally meets after the incident...both feeling uncomfortable...searching for words they could not find or holding back words they could not speak...]








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