Free Will vs. Fate 我們的命運﹐殺手的故事
Copyright Tin Tin 2000 All Rights Reserved.
Fan Fiction by Tin Tin


Main Characters

Ice Wan Bing-Jessica Hsuan
Deci Wan Suet-Jessica Hsuan
Jaye Wan Wun-Joey Meng
Rain Wan Lum-Marianne Chan
Wan Seung-Vivian Leung
Wan Lui-Jacky Lui
Wan Law Mei-Lisa Wong
Edan Wong Sung Yuen-Louis Koo
Pit Wong Sung Tin-Wong Hei
Joe Chow Kin-Julian Cheung
Hang Lee Sing-William Lam
Tommy Lau Siu Man-Eric Wan
CiCi Kwok Yan Ci-Annie Man
Kwok Fung-Adam Cheng
Kwan Bik Yuk-Carol DoDo Cheng
Ha Ching-Wallis Pang
Jen Lam Bo Ming-Joyce Tang
Dylan Lam Bo Yau-Steven Ma
Lam Yuen-the vampire kid in MDWAV
Kyle Hoi Sueng Nam-Michael Tse
Sean Lee-Mark Kwok(not related to Hang Lee)


CHAPTER 15-KISS OF DEATH?

[Edan and Ice can only constantly take quick glances at each other...]
Tommy[realizes the situation]: umm..we'll get going first....[pulls Jen]

Jen: what? what's going on?

Tommy[signals Jen]: let's go...[they enter the elevator]

[the situation doesn't seem to be easing this very moment...neither would give in a word...Ice couldn't take this anymore....a position going no where, she decides to escape this unapt feeling and runs for the stairs...]

[exiting the building...Ice went to retreive her car...]
Edan[follows from behind]: If it's such unfortunate seeing me...why do you even bother?...

Ice[turns around]: ok, I deserve that...[continues to unlocks her car door...]

Edan[refrains her car door]: are we going to have to go through this everytime we see each other?

Ice[burst out]: I'm sorry, I'm sorry...ok...can we just forget everything...like you said, there is NO US...

Edan[holds onto her arms]: you have to stop this...you have to release yourself...I took the night to review the situation...I took in deep consideration on your part...my conclusion resulted the same...Dylan isn't going to come back no matter what really happened behind the facts...you have let go on his death...and...and I still love you...

Ice: what do you know? you can't tell me what to do? I have my own ways of living, and I don't need you here to trace through my problems and remind me of anything. And please don't say anything you don't really mean...[quickly drives away...]

[the next day...same situation as yesterday..]
Edan[sees Ice, run over to her]
Ice: when will you ever learn? we couldn't be together...we SHOULDN'T be together...it'll never work...

Edan: only this burden is holding us back...I know we can break through this wall...together...

Ice[explodes with high volume]: you're offering your love and concern for me again? after all that has happened? are you out of your mind?

Edan: the only thing in my mind is you....every second the thought of losing you repetitively rings in my head...

Ice[shakes her head]: you're too good to be true....the world most biggest nut case I've ever met...Edan, just let-it-be...[suddenly Edan forces his lips on hers...planting a big one, grabbing her neck...Ice tempts to unloose...but god forbids, Edan...is a man....]

Edan[finally releases to catch his breath...]

Ice[catching her breath...emerges with anger..]: what the hell was that? you nearly suffocated me to death...

Edan[wipes his lips]: they don't call it the 'Kiss of Death' for no particular reason...

Ice: what do you want from me? you're only frustrating me now...

Edan: give us both a chance...you know that I, Wong Sung Yuen loves you and you..[stops]

Ice: you don't even know my name...

Edan: ...i do...Wan...Wan Bing...yes that's it...

Ice: no...no... yesterday we seemed like long term enemies...now you're making a joke out of this....it's not funny anymore...

Edan: I am serious, I know we have feelings for each other...you and I both know that it does exist...

Ice[eyes circling]: so I didn't...like.... 'use' ....you anymore?

Edan: now are we going to start mentioning the past and pick fights? nothing we said yesterday should have been taken seriously....but with the exception of our true tears....

Ice: tears? [chuckles] Edan, the only thing you saw closest to my tears was obviously the rain...I do not cry for any man...my son is the only qualification...

Edan: well then I will see to it that you will be breaking the rules of your own game...

Ice[turns serious]: you know I will never forget Dylan...

Edan: everyone has their past...i once told you that i didn't even need to know who you are to love you...it is still the same now...as they say, time is the best activating pill... it's based on the fact if you are willing to 'let go'...

Ice[hearing the two words again, mentally alerted discomfort into her]: I comprehend that you're not going to let me go any time soon...I'll make a deal with you...[ponders for a moment] If you can take the position of A2...there will be a chance...

Edan[reveals a smile]: pinky swear? wait, you're from TO?

Ice:...don't be too happy, you'll never imagine who you're up against....[crosses his pinky and releases]....now can I leave?

Edan: can I? [wants to get in too...]

Ice: no...[starts her car]

Edan[stops her]: Bing, just to let you know...I'm really not trying to pressure you...[smiles...] and one more thing..something you should hear...I'm sorry too....

[Ice drives into the parking lot of her building...]
Ice[gets out]....

Yuen: Bing Jah! [runs over]

Ice[lifts Yuen up]: woo...getting heavier and heavier...

Yuen: I told you, you just don't have time to see me...

Ice: I'm sorry little guy...I'll promise I'll make it up some how...[to CiCi] thanks for everything...

CiCi: You're only taking my valuable church time...it's not that bad....

Ice: you know what I meant...

CiCi: of course I do...having to put up with your ups and downs, how can I not know...

[in a nearby park..Ice and CiCi sits on the swings, while Yuen knocks himself out with the slides and monkey bars...]
Ice: time really pasted quickly...actually everything is happening to fast for me to catch up...

CiCi: is that a fuss? you must be fussing...is there something I should get right away?

Ice: what are you trying to say?

CiCi: what are you trying to tell me?

Ice: he's doing it again...

CiCI: he who?

Ice[tilts her head with a stare]: you know...

CiCi: he must be some great guy for you to be so troublesome over him....

Ice: tell me about it...so hot..tall and tanned..[both giggles]...ahh

CiCi: you're doing it again...

Ice: doing what?

CiCi: hiding your feelings, in front of me!

Ice: what is there to hide?

CiCi: Dylan, is who I'm refering to...

Ice: you can't let me get away can't you? [grabs CiCi to hug tightly] Ci, I have decided to free myself from the burden that has been mentally imprisoning me all these years...I want to....let go...I have been carry this burden for avenging Dylan's death, I feel it's about time I stop...besides, there is now a fabulous round trip waiting for me...

CiCi: no more, [imitating] "I'm now going to give up, until i get the killer" talk?

Ice[shakes her head]

CiCi: ok, then I'm happy for you...oh um, is that Pit guy the brother of Edan...

Ice: yes...

CiCi: so, does he go to church often?

Ice: how would I know?

CiCI[nods]: yeah...how would you know...

Ice: wait, do you like him?

CiCi[avoids to answer..walks away..]

Ice: hey you...

[in nyc...Joe finally had the courage to return to what was once called home. On the way, he couldn't help but to gaze directly at Deci's window. Letting out a sign, he continues to enter his home. He sense the dull atmosphere, realizing a layer of dust in every corner...]
Joe[picking up a note from the fridge...glimpsing through the note...he started to pant...]: they found Deci in HK?!! [he ran out of the house instantly...]

[Joe rapidly got into his car. Without hesistation, he knows he has to get to the aiport promptly...but he would have never guessed....the light in Deci's room is suddenly turned on...]

[unknown...]
Seung: this is your next job...you would have to go out of state for this one...

Deci[receives the envelope containing info of her next target]: Hong Kong?

Seung: yes...there wouldn't be a problem, is there?

Deci: no...it's like going back home...(I wonder if my sisters are there?) [leaves]

[HK, in Edan's apt]
Pit[laughing hysterically at Edan]: she really told you that?

Hang[on the phone]: he's never home...gosh I hope he's ok...

Edan: what do you mean? and stop laughing...

Pit: I'm sure you have no idea...but Bing is A2...I hope that didn't attack your confidence...[giggles again]

Edan: what? you...she...oh god...that means we've been in contact before...how coincidence...then we've been in the same occassions many times...no wonder I had a familiar feeling when I first met her...well actually even after all the identity mixture...this is wonderful, we must have left off many footsteps in the same room...

[Hang and Pit gave him a weird look...]

Pit: ok, i was wrong...Edan is obsessed with Bing...[to Hang] what's the luck on contacting Joe?

Hang: he's no where to be found...

Edan: well at least we did leave a note for him...he's going to race over here cause we told him that we found Deci...which of course we didn't...[signs]

Hang: poor Joe...I wonder what really happened to Deci...

[in the afternoon...Rain and Hang are left alone in the apt...]
Rain: so...so you don't have a job today?

Hang: nah, I'm pretty picky...don't work on Fridays..

Rain[nobs her head]: oh...so, what's your favorite food?

Hang: oh talk about food, I'm craving for some sticky rice..you know where they make the best? there's this old man who always holds his stand by the corner of...[realizes Rain's undivided attention over his non sense]

Rain: continue...where is it? oh nevermind...what kind of movies do you watch?

Hang: I go for comedies...always need a good laugh...

Rain: where do you shop often?

Hang: in nyc, I hang around SoHo(South Houstin) most of the time

Rain: oh...have you ever been to Internet Cafe by 1st Ave, 2nd street?

Hang: once in a while...they should upgrade some of their pcs man...

Rain: do you like mexican food?

Hang: sure, why not? anything that I can put in my mouth and do not end with a severe abdominal pain...I eat...

Rain: what about...

Hang[shifts away]: what is wrong with you? [gives her the stares]

Rain: what, nothing?

Hang: nothing? you seem like you wanted to dig up my whole background...what else do you wanna know? what size underwear do I wear?

Rain[gets offended]: what is the meaning of this? what's with the attitude? I'm just curious...no need to step all over me...

Hang: ha, a second there I thought I was going through interrogation...

Rain: how rude...

Hang: oh, I passed the rudeness ages ago...

Rain: what kind of person are you?

Hang: a full 100% man...

Rain: Jerk [rises up and throws a cushion at him...] watch out for food poisioning...[angryly slams her room's door....]

Hang: oh that went good...[laughs evilly] I'll know who to find when my mouth itches....

[the next day....Edan and Ice are walking together in the streets]
Ice: you know stalking me everyday wouldn't ease my mind....the deal is still on...

Edan: you're sly..but i like it....

Ice: so..Pit must of told you....surprised?

Edan: yes, a bit surprised but that doesn't mean I'm going to give up

Ice[knocks his forhead]

Edan: what?

Ice: you most have forgotten, you never beated me...

Edan: I'm being fed confidence by seeing you everyday....

Ice[playfully shivers]: yuck...

Edan: well then is there any other ways to build points on your grade book in the mean time?

[on the other side of the street]
Ching: hey, give that back...[pestered by a group of gang members...]

Gangkid 1: come and get it...[tosses Ching's luggage to another gang]

Ching: stop this..give it back...

Ice[to Edan]: yes, help me kick some asses...[rushes over]

Edan: huh?

Ice: hey, wanna pick on someone your own size? [the crew of gang looks Edan up and down...noticing Edan purposely straightens up his body...]

Gang person: talking about you, pretty face? [goes up and lays his hands on Bing...]

Ice[quickly twisted his hands...Edan throws a punch at him]

Ching: Bing, I'm so glad to see you...[the gang rushes to fight Edan] Hey...[manages to kick a guy between his legs...]

Gang kid #2: ahh...you bitch....[slaps Ching...seeing this, Edan comes to her resue...]

[in a restaurant]
Ice: Ching, how's your face?

Ching: no, I'm fine...that was a good fight...did you see that wimp?

Ice: good fight? you have to change your acts....look at you...gold headed and shirtless...you're almost wearing nothing inside...[flings her petty coat back and forth...]

Ching: when I need a mother, I'll ask you.. you're not even bothering to introduce me with my lifesaver?

Edan: oh don't say that...

Ice: he's Wong Sung Yuen...

Edan: call me Edan...

Ching: call me Ching...Bing's buddy...

[in Ice's apt...]
Ice[entering with Ching and Edan: CiCi, guess who came?

CiCi: Bing....oh Ching! [hugs Ching]

Ching: Ci...

CiCi: and you most be Edan...heard a lot about you...[Ice gently knocks CiCi with her elbow...] ok..ok...

[settles in the livingroom..]
CiCi: you can stay as long as you want...

Ice: umm....I'm in charged of rent here...I'm only joking...be my guest...Yuen is going to be so happy...you're the most compatible with him...

Ching: thanks guys...well, the truth is...I caused a lot of trouble in nyc...so I can't go back now...at least not yet...

Edan[his phone rings..he picks up]: Ah gor? what's up? ok...at Bing's place now...you can come over cause I didn't drive...oh whichever you like then...okay...

Ice: Pit?

Edan: yeah, I have to leave now...nice meeting you all...[gets up]

Ice[escorts him to the door]: bye...

Edan: and you, don't forgot to jot down the credits I earned today...[leaves]

CiCi: Pit?!

Ching: umm, I wonder why that sounded a bit over passionate?

Ice: ah ha...it's not only I who sense it..

CiCi: stop it...

Ching: do you like him? [Ice began to laugh] Is that the vibe I am getting now?

CiCi: what?

Ice: Gosh, you're only a christian..not a nun...

CiCi: oh now you're getting way out of proportion...

Ching: I'm going to head downstairs for some junk food...would you like to come, Ci? HE might be down there any minute...

CiCi: so, what do I care?

Ching: like what he was wearing?! hehehe

CiCi: errr...I'm not talking to you...

Ching: I'll find out for you anyway...[CiCi continues to blush her long way to her room]

[the next day...in Edan's place...]
Ice: no...I ate on my own already...

Pit: are you sure you don't want some? [holding onto a dish]

CiCi: no...she can't....I mean, it looks too greasy...

Pit: okay...you're losing a lot...Hang is a great cook....even with such great flaws he has, it's unbelievable isn't it?...

Hang: talking behind my back again? [coming out with another dish]

Rain: you'll need to take years to be able to record all his flaws..

Hang: did anyone ask you?

Rain: bite me...

Edan: stop it..you two...

Pit: they've been like this every since...god knows when...

[their door bell suddenly rang uncontrollablely...]

Hang: gosh, who is it? I'm coming...

Rain: it's not Jaye, she's out again....

Hang[opens the door...]: Oh my god...it's Joe!!!

Joe[heart is pumping spontaneously]: Hang, let me in...

Hang[slides the gate open...]

Joe[ran in]: where is she? where is Suet?

Pit: oh..wait..wait, we have to explain...

Joe[didn't care for anything else...see's Ice...he ran over like a shooting bullet to embrace Ice....] Suet...I finally found you....

[Ice didn't know what to do...Edan and Ice steady gazed each other...didn't know how to break it to Joe...]








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