Free Will vs. Fate 我們的命運﹐殺手的故事
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Fan Fiction by Tin Tin


Main Characters

Ice Wan Bing-Jessica Hsuan
Deci Wan Suet-Jessica Hsuan
Jaye Wan Wun-Joey Meng
Rain Wan Lum-Marianne Chan
Wan Seung-Vivian Leung
Wan Lui-Jacky Lui
Wan Law Mei-Lisa Wong
Edan Wong Sung Yuen-Louis Koo
Pit Wong Sung Tin-Wong Hei
Joe Chow Kin-Julian Cheung
Hang Lee Sing-William Lam
Tommy Lau Siu Man-Eric Wan
CiCi Kwok Yan Ci-Annie Man
Kwok Fung-Adam Cheng
Kwan Bik Yuk-Carol DoDo Cheng
Ha Ching-Wallis Pang
Jen Lam Bo Ming-Joyce Tang
Dylan Lam Bo Yau-Steven Ma
Lam Yuen-the vampire kid in MDWAV
Kyle Hoi Sueng Nam-Michael Tse
Sean Lee-Mark Kwok(not related to Hang Lee)


CHAPTER 16-DEFENSELESS LOVE

[Ice having her arms extended out and Joe embracing tightly...she felt really bad...but she knows someone has to do the dirty job...]
Ice: Joe, Joe?

Joe[looks up at Ice]

Ice: before you say anything...listen to us first...

Joe[becomes confuse and releases Ice]

Ice: I'm not Suet...Suet is still not yet found...

Joe:....[his face wringles up]: what? what do you mean you're not Suet? You are Suet...

Ice: I'm not Wan Suet...my name is Wan Bing...we are identical twins...

Joe: I don't...what? Wan Bing?

Edan: Joe, it's the truth...We never found Suet...we at first thought Bing was Suet too but she isn't..

Joe: then what am I doing here? I'm going back to NY....[turns around to leave]

Pit: Joe [stops him] you have to quit acting like this...you're not going to find Suet with this behavior...

Joe: how do you expect me to behave? she's been missing for over months and maybe even months to come...time is what I'm lacking...who knows what might have happened to her by now...

Ice: you really do love her...

Joe: my love for her does not need to be commented or questioned.....

Ice: I want you to know, I have also sent people to look for her....you're not alone...don't drown yourself with this responsiblity...I know it's really heavy, I know how you feel...I've been though something similar, maybe even worsier situation(finding Suet and avenging Dylan's death before)...

Edan[puts his hands on Ice's shoulder for comfort]

CiCi: Joe, we have gathered some knowledge....

Joe: huh? what? what do you know?

Ice: She was last seen with another killer, Wan Seung...

Rain: Wan Seung? I should have known...

Pit: you know her?

Rain: yes, you guys knew her too...remember at the ophanage...the 5 Wan's...Wan Suet, Wan Wun, Wan Lum, Wan Lui and Wan Seung...

Ice: I've been meaning to ask...why are all your surnames followed with a Wan? You are not even related to Suet..

Hang: actually this is the story...Wan Suet was the only one who had a last name..the rest of them didn't even have a clue on their name period...so they all followed Suet's surname

Rain: you remembered?

Hang: yes, surprisingly I do...

Rain(but what you didn't remember was that you gave me my name...)....

Edan: wait, guys, back with Wan Seung...

Joe: why does she want Suet?

Rain: you see, Wan Lui, our big brother had a thing for Suet since we were small...but Seung likes Lui which therefore Seung has been envious of Suet ever since...it is also the parly why we couldn't be sisters...

Joe: Wan Lui?...I've seen a guy at the same occasions when I met with Wan Seung...could it be him?

Pit: that is a possiblity...he must have went to save Suet as well...

Joe: Look at us...there's so many of us and there's only one Wan Seung...what are we waiting for?

CiCi: we don't know who else is backing her up...

Edan: she is right...

Joe: I don't care...[begins to haste out the door...]

Ice: I should have never told you...if I have conducted that way you have been...do you think I'll get anywhere? If you say you love Suet, please take care of yourself, not only for you but as a favor to her...[Joe stood there in silience...Jaye enters the scene]

Jaye: what's going on? [sees Joe and then Ice] can someone fill me in?

[joined together in the living room...]
Jaye[still looking at Ice with insincere eyes..]....

Pit: we should look on first...

Hang: look on the bright side...we haven't heard any negative news up to now...[instantly, everyone caught the contrained silence and deep stares given off by Ice and Jaye...]

Rain: umm...a.....umm...why....

[both Ice and Jaye stands up...]

CiCi[stands up too, clutched on to Ice's arm..] Bing...

Ice[unhands CiCi and nods her head; she knows what she's doing..]

[seemingly, not everyone understands their actions....but they continued...Ice unbends her right arm, a sign in letting Jaye walk first...Jaye takes a steps forward and Ice follows...they leave the apt...]

Rain: what just happened?

Hang: Didn't they look like they wanted to devour each other's guts before?...now ...they maybe onto a conspiracy of some sort...woman[shakes his head]...one phase fits all....out of the ordinary...

Rain[slaps Hang..]: mind your mouth...there's another woman standing right next to you...

Hang: what, who? [pretends to look around] what woman?

Pit: alright guys...stop the childish acts..

Joe: should we follow them?

Edan: i think not...

[outside, by a sea shore...both standing side by side...]
Ice: 10 minutes have past, are we going to persist on staring out into the sea or...

Jaye: I'm still not very clear...

Ice: I would prefer things the way they are now if I were you...having things too visible, isn't such a good idea...

Jaye: right, you don't know me...there's no way I'm going to set free any chances of assimilating you and everything behind you...

Ice: it wouldn't be that easy...though certain things are pretty obvious...

Jaye: twins? I believe you...Edan's lover? I also believe you...are we on the same boat?...[hesitates]

Ice: why stop there?

Jaye: are you?

Ice: I can assure you, you could've went on...

Jaye: why? why do I have to believe you?

ice: Is there any reason why you shouldn't?

Jaye: I'll get to the point...for some reason I somehow know you aren't just any ordinary killer...likewise I'm almost positive that your increment of predominance is the highest among even with all of us combined.

Ice[signs]: I detect a rush of undervalue ness...

Jaye: so what is it?

Ice[quickly replies]: Who do you take me for? she is my blood sister...the last thing I need is an exterior requesting that I, her biological sister to resue her...

Jaye: I may not be her blood sister but we are even more then that...all 3 of us, Suet, Lum and I go beyond any sisters...we hold a bond because we were somehow disunited from our biological kins....you and Suet may never meet that stage...think again who is the outsider?

Ice: you don't understand...I have been searching for Suet since the day I was informed about another existence that bear my exact facial appearance...[pauses] what I'm sure of now is that we both support the same causation...

Jaye: I think I have learned that too...

Ice: I don't want to bring out an awkward question but...do you trust me?

Jaye: Yes...[smiles]

Ice: we haven't formally met but by talking to you..I already know we are..

Jaye: ....very alike...

[in the streets]
Pit: It isn't that unreasonable for Jaye to react like this....

Hang: yeah...having to discern Jaye....she is extremely protective over her sisters...she acts like their conservator,,,,

CiCi: don't doubt Bing...Suet is her only sister...

Pit: but I can't help to ponder the same as Jaye...it seems like there are a lot of things we don't know about Bing...[turns to CiCi] both Bing and you....

CiCi[smiles and walk ahead]: everything that is needed to be revealed is revealed...answers will slower take it's course...

Pit: I'll take your word for it....[they see Jaye and Ice walking back together...]

Hang[runs over]: Jaye! Where have you two been?

CiCi: I believe everything is back to normal....

Jaye: yes...Bing, do you want stay over and discuss...

Ice: sure...

CiCi: no...[gives Ice a look] no...she can't...

Ice: oh yes, I can't today...we'll keep in contact...

Jaye: ok [they walk away...]

Hang[staring at their backs]: what's with them? [Pit shakes his shoulders]

Jaye: let's go...we don't need to know now....

CiCi[in a scolding tone]: you can't skip another diet meal, risking with your health again....you know you can't just consume any food...if I didn't remind you, you're really going off with them? who's the sick person here?

Ice: stop...stop...I got it...Ci, how can I live without you!

CiCi[signs]: are you mocking me? this is only the benefit of your health...you are diabetic...I will repeat myself if I have to....anything to keep you alert...[looks at Ice] you look hungry...

Ice: not really...believe me, I can live without a day of legumes

CiCi: I did some research....lack of food at the right time can cause your blood sugar level to lower...why don't you every listen? and legumes can provide energy to the body by supplying immediate calories so you can lessen on the insulin injections...and oh fiber too...

Ice[a bit irritated]: yes, mother...when can you stop pestering me now?

CiCi[shakes her head[....did you carry any hard candy? [signs again] I did...[went to search for it in her pockets]

Ice[suddenly holds CiCi tightly to hug...] Ci, you're going to make me cry!

CiCi[jokes back]: then get off me first...this shirt cost me a fortune...

Ice[laughs]

[the next day...]
Jen[talking into the walkie talkie from another car]: Man Gor, the target still hasn't showed his face yet....

Tommy: guys, wait longer...

Jeff: Ah Tao, if this guy is going to show up, he would have 2 nights ago...

Jen[shouted]:.....ah, it's him! I spotted him...

Tommy: everyone, action....[every cops in his team went into action....]

[in the streets]
Man(no important): the new shipment of weapons have arrived...

Jaye: I'll place my order as soon as possible...[suddenly everyone's attention from this block is given to the wild goose chase...]

Tommy: stop running...we are the police...

Criminal[as he runs, he eyes a pregnant woman]

Jaye[catches his motive, she purposely stepped in between, preventing the criminal from getting near the pregnant woman...but he quickly held on o Jaye as hostage instead..]

Criminal: don't move or I'll shoot this woman...

Tommy[shocked]: Jaye?! release the woman...

Jeff: let her go...[every cops aims their gun at him]

Jaye[appears to be calm]: it's wiser if you do as they say...

Criminal: shut up....[pointing the gun at Jaye, he shuttles backwards..manage to snatch an off guard car...pulls Jaye in with him] drive bitch..drive!

[off on the road...]
Criminal: stupid cops...think you can play with the master....

Jaye[driving]: I believe you're the most unintelligent one to hold me hostage...

Criminal: shut up or I'll blow your heads off...

Jaye: wanna bet I'll beat you to it...[takes out her gun...and stops the car...]

Criminal: huh? don't startle my patients...who do you think you are...

Jaye: the last person you'll every see....[seizes his gun....BANG!...]

[Tommy's team finally catches up...]
Tommy[gets out of the car]: Jaye! [sees Jaye lying on the middle of the road...everyone else runs over to the car where the criminal settles...]

Jeff: He's dead...he suicided?

Tommy[picks Jaye up...]: Jaye! Jaye!

Jaye: I'm fine...but my head is banging...

Jen: what happened?

Jaye: he, he pushed me out of the car...[shows them tiny scatches]

Tommy: someone call for an ambulance...

Jaye: I'm ok...

Tommy: no...just incase...

Jen[mumbles to herself]: gosh, it's not even that noticable...

[in Edan's building...]
Tommy[holding onto Jaye]: I still thought we should have brought you to the hospital...for safety purposes...[Jen, annoyingly picks her finger as she has to observe Tommy's closeness with Jaye...]

Jaye: don't worry...it's my health...I should know...

Tommy[rings the doorbell]

Rain[opens the door...sees the situation...]: Jah? what happened to you? [opens the gate...]

Jaye: it's nothing...

Tommy: today she encountered...

Jen[interrupts]: Man Gor, I'm going home...[leaves]

Hang: hmm...i think you should run along too...

Tommy: ok...Jaye, watch out for infections...

Jaye[smiles]: I will..thanks..

Hang: yes, she will....bye[leads him to the door...] adios! [shuts the door] don't come back...

Rain[stares at Hang]: what did you say?

Hang: nothing...

Jaye[liberally drops on the couch...]: it's no biggy....

Rain: you have 2 people escorting you home and might I add 2 policeman... How do you feel I should think?

Hang: I know...that picture didn't even seemed right...

Jaye: you just need to know...this whole thing was a gain for me....I just finished my lastest mission...

Rain: that quick?

Jaye: details later...

Hang: something to add...don't you feel that Timothy...

Jaye: ...Tommy

Hang: yeah, whatever...Tommy over done his duty?

Jaye: he's just a friend...

Hang: yeah, he better be just a friend...

Rain: what are you doing? trying to give my sister the third degree? she doesn't have to explain anything to you...

Hang: well if she wants to she can, and she did...

Jaye: oh god, not again....I'm taking a nap...

[Ice and Edan is sharing a conversation on the phone...]
Ice: are you sure? It's a bit too quick isn't it?

Edan: don't underestimate me...

Ice: I'm not...I just don't want to rush you...

Edan: Bing, even if you had made this deal to 'torture'..no excuse me, 'test' my love for you...I'm all yours because I simply can't wait no matter what the outcome would be...

Ice: ahh..I'm really flattered!

Edan: too bad I can't see how flattered you are...

CiCi[poking and picking on Ice]: you..you...

Ice: hold on..I have to yell at someone...[to CiCi] what do you want? this is a bit too personal...I don't need a third party eavesdropping this instant....

CiCi: I thought you were only joking when you said that....you don't really think you're going to let Edan challenge you? before maybe but now...I don't think so...

Ice: What?

CiCi: don't you read? any kind of excessive exercise can cause a low blood sugar level...and with my knowledge...all that karate, kung fu, tae-kwan-do..you name it...will lead to excessive exercising

Ice:...[picks up the phone] Edan, I'll call you back...[hangs up]

CiCi: if you ask me...it seems like this sickness is becoming part of my life and unreflecting yours...haven't you learnt the seriousness yet? ahhh... you're killing me Wan Bing....

Ice: what do you suppose I should do now?

CiCi: just accept that guys love and do admit it that you like that guy up to a degree...

Ice: you know what, you're right...I should call off this dumb bet...you have also awaken me...you made me recognize the fact that I carry an incurable disease....[dry laughs] it's no lie...why should I put Edan into an impracticable relationship...

CiCi: hold it...this is way out of my league...I hope I don't really deserve all that credit...

Ice: face it...my life expectancy...

CiCi: no...God will bless you....you're going to live a long life...i don't want to hear it

Ice: I've sinned all my life....

CiCi: I said I don't want to hear it....[covers her ears] la la la....

[the next day...in HK's TO....]
Kyle[working behind doors; speaks into an intercom]: A10, who's the woman standing outside?

A10: she said she's waiting for a member to challenge...

Kyle: oh....ok...back to work[releases the button]

Ice[comes in]: Kyle...Kyle...did anyone arrived asking to challenge me? I couldn't find him all night and day....

Kyle: who's him? i'm not sure...but there's a person ouside...[they step outside] but it's not a him...

Deci[turns around]: The Phoenix?

Ice: who are you?

Deci: you finally arrived! I've came to compete for your possition...

Kyle[constantly looking back and forth at Ice and Deci]: umm...is it me or do I see a remarkable resemblance?

Ice: what?

Kyle: weren't you asking if someone came...

Ice: I'm talking about A4...

Deci: enough...you're A2...you must accept my challenge...

Ice[stares deeply into Deci]:...

Deci[too naive to realize...]: don't tell me our A2 is trying to check out on this one...

Ice[eyes widen]: Suet?

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