Free Will vs. Fate 我們的命運﹐殺手的故事
Copyright Tin Tin 2000 All Rights Reserved.
Fan Fiction by Tin Tin


Main Characters

Ice Wan Bing-Jessica Hsuan
Deci Wan Suet-Jessica Hsuan
Jaye Wan Wun-Joey Meng
Rain Wan Lum-Marianne Chan
Wan Seung-Vivian Leung
Wan Lui-Jacky Lui
Wan Law Mei-Lisa Wong
Edan Wong Sung Yuen-Louis Koo
Pit Wong Sung Tin-Wong Hei
Joe Chow Kin-Julian Cheung
Hang Lee Sing-William Lam
Tommy Lau Siu Man-Eric Wan
CiCi Kwok Yan Ci-Annie Man
Kwok Fung-Adam Cheng
Kwan Bik Yuk-Carol DoDo Cheng
Ha Ching-Wallis Pang
Jen Lam Bo Ming-Joyce Tang
Dylan Lam Bo Yau-Steven Ma
Lam Yuen-the vampire kid in MDWAV
Kyle Hoi Sueng Nam-Michael Tse
Sean Lee-Mark Kwok(not related to Hang Lee)


CHAPTER 17-UNWANTED ORDERS

Edan[comes along]: Hey, why is everyone standing here? hey you...A2, are you ready? [Edan didn't realized it was talking to Deci rather then Ice...]

Deci: you?....[stares into Ice] you...

Edan[notices, he thinks he is seeing two Ice]: what is going on? [he doesn't know who is who...]

Ice[she runs over to Deci]: Suet! [smiles gratefully] Suet! I found you....

[Kyle makes everyone else leave the place.]

Edan: Suet? oh this is great! Joe is going to be so happy....

Deci: who are you? [confused]

[everyone took off their masks....]

Kyle[in shockness]: WOO!

Edan: they are twins...

Deci: I am a twin?

Kyle: oh so you're the gal Joe's been frantically seeking?

Deci: Joe, Joe...where is he?

Ice: he's fine...he's in HK too...Suet...[touches her face]

Deci[removes Ice's hand and shuttles backward]...

Ice: I am your sister...I am older then you by 4 minutes...[Deci didn't know what to say...]

Edan: Bing, why don't we bring Suet back to our place first...Jaye and Rain have also longed to see her...

Deci: they are here too?

[entering the apt...]
Rain[in the kitchen...hears the gate opening...]: they are coming home...Jah, stop looking like that....

Jaye: I know, I know...let's go see how Joe is....[on the way, they hear the shaking of the keys.] They're coming home.

Edan[steps in first]: guys, we've found her. [both Ice and Deci walks in]

Rain[shocked]: Ah Jah! Suet ah.....

Jaye: Suet! [both ran over to hug Deci]

Deci: Ah Jah! Lum! I really missed you. [they all shred their fair share of tears.]

Jaye: where were you all these month? We couldn't find you anywhere?

Rain: Did Seung really captured you?

Jaye: Are you hurt? [looks Deci up and down, from right to left]

Deci: Jah, I'm fine....

Joe[half awake, walking out]: What with all the noises?

Deci[breaks out in tears]: Joe!

Joe[tears automatically ran down his face]: are you really Suet? [he didn't run up to her instantly because he feared that someone will tell him that it' s not Suet.]

Deci[nods her head]: Joe....I'm Suet! I'm really Suet. [they quickly embraces each other.]

Joe: it's been so long. [made tiny pecks of kisses all over Suet's face and head.]

Edan: they finally found each other. [takes this moment to wrap his arms around Ice] when are we going to be like them?

Ice[purposely removes his arm]:....[smiles weakly]

[Hourly later, they settle down.]
Rain: you mean, Seung did take you away but didn't do anything to you? ok, that's hard to believe.

Jaye: as long as you're back with us...no one is going to kipnap you that easily....

Deci[every word coming out of her mouth has been thought out carefully]: yes...

Ice: Suet. I hope I can bring you to a place. To meet with our mother.

Deci: our mother?

Ice: yes, our mother. you and I, only...

[Ice and Deci entered a hideout place]
Ice: you're not planning to bringing it up?

Deci: I don't know what you are referring to.

Ice[they stop and stands in the center of the place]: Suet. I know you are the well-known Flasher everyone has been talking about these days...

Deci(how?): what?

Ice: you are, aren't you?

Deci:....

Ice: I understand that you may not feel comfortable revealing it to me but you didn't even bother telling them....your sisters.

Deci:....

Ice: is something stopping you?

Deci:.......[looks away]

Ice: If you don't want to say, I won't pressure you anymore. [she turns her way to exit.]

Deci: where are you going? I thought you're going to bring me to my mother?

Ice: maybe next time....she's out of HK...

Deci: is our mother....(a killer)

Ice: you'll find out soon enough...let's leave...

[In Ice's home...]
CiCi: I was wonder about that too....She acted pretty stiff infront of everyone....didn't want to explain much.

Ice: I decided not to bring her to mother yet. I don't know what she's thinking. I don't know what may have influenced her in becoming the Flasher. Therefore, I'm still counting on her reliability.

Yuen[walking out]: but she's still my aunt...[to Ice]your sister...[then to CiCi]your friend's sister...[Ice and CiCI turns to him]

Ice: which hole did you pop out from?

CiCi: you know it's not nice to eavesdrop and definitely not on adult issues...

Yuen: come on....I know everything already....don't let my age and appearance...

Ice: Hush! enough talking from you little man...go to bed! you have school...

Yuen: fine, you don't need to raise your voice at me...[waddles into his room]

CiCi: don't you love that kid...

Ice: yes, can't get enough of his unusual talents....we were we?

CiCi: About Suet. I too agree that we should tell that her mother is the owner of TO, the organization she is working for.

[Joe and Deci are home alone...]
Deci[sitting on Joe's lap on the couch]: how long have we not been so close together? I can hear your heart beat. [positions her head on his chest]

Joe: a very long time. My days without you was so painful. [turns face to face to Deci] Suet, promise me that you won't let anything happen to you...ever again...don't disappear on me...

Deci: there's no guarentee in our fates..

Joe: I know, I know...

Deci: I will try....[they embraces again]

[days later...everyone joins in a yacht...]
Ching: what a great day...nice weather...free food....we have a party going on...

Ice: Yes, Ching! this might be just your day...and I like what you did....got rid of those gold strips and changed into a decent outfit for the good.

CiCi: when did you say that they will arrive? Yuen is probably going to gobble all that food being alone downstairs...

Ice: should be here anytime soon.

Ching: why, you can't wait for....you know, that guy Pit?

CiCi: I'm going check on Yuen....[leaves]

Ice: stop teasing her...

Jen: Yeah, I can tell she's very shy on these subject...

Ching: I can't help it...

Tommy: hehe, is this all you woman talk about?

Ice: oh bear with us, women...the guys are coming...

Tommy: it's pretty shocking to know that you're actually a twin...

Jen: I know....I hope I can tell you two apart.

Ching: Well, I must say...you never know....everyone might have a twin out there. I'm gonna find Ci now...[leaves]

[the sound of a motorboat engine riding toward them caught their attention....]

Jen: Hey, they're coming....[Edan, lifting Sum arrives with PIt, Joe, Deci, Jaye, Rain and Hang. They all came on board one after another...soon enough they all spread out into different corners of this yacht...]

[Edan didn't know what obstructed his relationship with Ice. Ever since the incident at TO, Edan noticed Ice is focing cold affection on him...even constantly avoiding him.]
Edan: Bing, what's going on? [speeding up from behind Suet....]

Ice: nothing...

Edan: nothing? Tell me...what did I do wrong? I'll do anything to make it up...

Ice: stop..please stop...[puts her hand on her forehead and her other hand on her waist] Look over there [she points; Edan turns that way, she runs aways]

[on the other side...Tommy is casual talking with Jaye while Jen stands around, purposely supervising...]
Tommy: Hey, you do volunteer service at The Elderly Center too?

Jaye: Yes, whenever I have free time...

Tommy: then you must be the Ms. Wan whom the grannies praise...they do really adore you...

Jaye: oh, really! I have't visited there over a month already...

Jen: I too share my time once at an orphanage...

Jaye: that's good...

Jen: I know...

Tommy: when was that? How come I wasn't informed?

Jen[eyes wanders off]: you were busy...

Tommy: ok... I'm going downstairs to get more refreshment...[Jen gets attentive over whom Tommy will ask first...]Jaye, what do you want?

Jaye: oh no more for me...

Tommy: Jen, what about you?

Jen[faces turns black and mumbles]: If only I can throw you off this cruise... [turns her back at them....]

[at the top of the ship]
Ching: are you going to ignore me for just a tiny harmless remark?

CiCi[looks out into the ocean]:...

Ching: come on [pulls on CiCi] with a cherry on top?

CiCi[turns to Ching and smiles]: I gotcha again!

Ching: ah shucks....

Edan[walking up the stairs]: Bing! Bing? [didn't see Ice] Oh...sorry, she's not here...

CiCi: isn't she with you?

Edan[shakes his head]:........[checks out Ching] you look different today...actually looking strangely fimil....

Ching[stares back](hey, is he interested in me?) [smiles]

CiCi: Edan? Edan? Hello?

Edan[didn't move at all....]: ohhhhh.....

Ching: I'm not liking this...

Hang[runs up the stairs with wine]: Hey, has anyone seen Jaye around? Is she up here... [last word fades off....sees Ching...he turns into another shocking Edan...even worst....he drops his bottle of wine...CiCi immediately catches it....]

CiCi: what's wrong with you guys? I'm here, you can drool over me too!

Hang: Oh my lord...

CiCi: hey watch it...stop bringing up my God during inappriotiate conversations...

Hang[hides behind Edan, freaks out shaking]: Wai, look...that time, I didn't mean to spoil your candle light dinner with Pit....the games were on that night....and you were always blaming Joe for stealing your shampoo...it was alway me not Joe...Joe toke the scapegoat...[Edan stares disgustingly at Hang over his crazy confessions, while Ching, getting irratited, haven't got a clue what the heck Hang is talking about...CiCi practically wanted to burst out laughing..] and no Candy(Wai's cat) didn't run away...I lied...I...I...[voice starts to plead]..I took her in my car and drove her all the way to Yung Long and dumped her in a park....that way I know for sure she wouldn'T know how to find her way home...For god sakes, she kept on choosing my bed to do her number 1's and even 2's...she forced me..and she had to do it everytime I just changed my new bed sheets...that Cat was planning tricks on me, I tell ya...and another time...

Ching: STOP!!! Hold it...[walks forward...] What in the bloody hell are you talking about?

CiCi: hello? Was I talking to air? No foul language allowed...

Hang: Ahhh...she's walking...she's coming back to avenge for Candy...

Edan[slaps him]: Hang...there's no such things as ghost...

Hang: then why is Wai standing infront of us when she's suppose to be lying peacefully at the cemetry?

Edan: because she's not Wai...

Ching: Choi! 'Dai Gut Lay See' If you don't tell me what's going on, you'll be the one lying in the cemetry...

Hang: see, she's faking it...she's bringing up death....she urging to kill...

CiCi: wait, i get it...you guys think she's Pit's deceased girlfriend?

Pit[walking up with wine]: Which one of you is screaming like that? It's upsettingly ill...[loosens his grip on the wine after seeing Ching...CiCi manages to catch it again...]

Ching[raises his arms and then slams it back on her thighs]: oh great, here we go again...now what did you do to Ah Wai? Let me guess. Fed her bird to a dog?

Hang[paranoids]: Ahhh, she knows about Lolly(bird's name) too....[jerks downstairs, hallcinating like a madman...]

Ching[eyebrows crooked]: umm...i just made that up...I am not the Wai you all speak of! Gosh!

Pit: you're right...it's impossible....

Ching: well, at least this one knows reality when it hits...unlike the other guy...I suppose you are all Ice's friends?

Edan: Yes, he's my brother Pit...and...[shamely speaks while shaking his head]..and that loony who foundered you with his list of confessions....he's Hang...don't worry...we have no blood relations with him....

Ching: oh then Wai is[points at Pit]....well, I'm Ha Ching...people call me 'wet mui Ching'...

CiCi: huh? no we don't....

Ching: obviously...you're not the people I was speaking of!

Pit[forcefully utters a laugh]:....[continues to glare at Ching]

[Hang finally finds Jaye..but with Tommy]
Hang[runs to them]: Jaye, oh there you are....

Jaye: Hang, what's going on?

Tommy: Yes, is something wrong? Anything I can help?

Hang: for all I know, you're only a lousy officer....

Jaye: lieutenant...

Hang: whatever...unless you tell me you quitted the force and became a ghost exterminator...I don't believe you can help...

Jaye: um...I don't get you...

[at another corner]
Ice: you don't have to accompany me, you know...

Rain: well, it looks like it but i'm actually not...[sees Hang with Jaye through the glass window and pouts...]...

Ice[notices]: oh...oh....do you like him that much?

Rain[looks away]: I don't know what you are talking about...

Ice: Hang wouldn't know until you tell him in his face...

Rain: Oh great...Am I making it that obvious?

Ice[chuckles]: apparently!!! it's quite eye-catching by your actions...I'm good for observing these things...

Rain: well, it's also definite he's interested in Ah Jah...not me...what can I do?

Ice: believe me...nothing is definite...even with the 'for all to see' couples...[directly gazes at Deci and Joe] it's hard to define them, even with my smarts...

Rain: um...that was a bit too deep...

Ice[smiles]: you didn't have to hear that....or understand it...

Yuen[runs toward Ice]: Bing Jah! Where is Auntie CiCI?

Ice: I think she's up stairs...why honey?

Yuen[didn't want to speak with Rain around]....I"ll go look for her....[takes off..walks over to where CICI is...] Auntie CiCi...

CiCi: Yuen, what's up little fellow?...

Yuen[suddenly picks up strange looks at Pit...he then glares off at another direction...his eyes starts to expand..] What is that? [he points] Ahhh...[another ship approaches toward them with around 10 men holding weapons facing their direction...]

CiCi[yells]: everyone DUCK!!

[the fire is off...the men is randomingly shooting at anything, at anyone...Everyone else tries their best to escape from getting hit...Tommy and Jen takes their gun to action...The first thing PIt did was to push Ching into safety, lacking concern for anyone else at that very moment...Everyone momentary forces shouts to overcome the firing noises...]

Pit: stay here...[remembers]Oh no...CiCi...[in his duck position, he repetitively sticks his head out, trying to locate CiCi...he runs over to them..]CiCi...

CiCi: I'm over here...[has her hands on Yuen's head...] Yuen..go...go downstairs...[he quickly runs off...]

Pit: how are the others?

CiCi: I don't know... [the shooting still continues...but also having Tommy and Jen firing back]

Pit[takes out his gun, was about to aim at some men..]

CiCi: no...[retrains him]...Tommy and Jen are here...

Edan[fearfully]: Bing?! Bing? Ah Gor? Gor?

Ice[speaks in deep concern]: Yuen? Yuen, where are you? Guys? I have to get to my son...

Rain: What's happening?

Hang: Holly shit...the nerves these bimbos show...[reaches for his gun...Jaye quickly gives him an 'are you crazy' stare and signals him to forget about his gun...]

Jen: who are these people?

[the men aboards their yacht..]
Lead man[he fires into the air]: Shut up!

[Everyone has themselves bent downwards with their hands on their head as the men surrounds and occupies the whole yacht...Unfortunately, this group of killers couldn't show their defense due to the presense of two officers...otherwise the situation would have been taken care of easily....By chance, a man grabs on to CiCi, threatens to kill her by demanding Tommy and Jen to drop their guns...they do as told...soon enough, the men gathers everyone into the center of the boat...Yuen is covering Sum's ears and assurring her as her little mind is scared to death...]

Tommy: we are HK police...let her go...[a man attempts to hit Tommy]

Jaye[quickly blocks in a flick]: watch it...

Man #2: you want to die bitch? [snatches a hand ful of Jaye's hair. Jaye plays along by acting weak]]

Tommy and Hang: Hey! let her go...

Tommy: she's only a helpless woman...this boat is full of vulneraries...don't hinder anyone otherwise the consequences will be unbearable when convicted. So don't say I didn't warn you.

Hang[mumbles to himself]: ha, calling us vulneraries...why don't you read off a bible....

Rain[utters back]: this is not the time...

[The killers all know they shouldn't reveal their guns...but all pondering for a form of escape...knowing that time is very scarce...CiCi and Ice starts to give off eye conacts...it rapidly travels around the killers...together, with the counts in each other's eyes...on three, they all begin to fight back...Tommy and Jen is amuse but it wasn't the right time to care...]

[CiCi slickly gives the man her elbow and hardly bangs the back of her head on his face. She shrewdly throws the man off the boat while conquering his gun.. Pit was rather amaze at her skills while glancing during his fighting. Jaye offers the man a high kick and painfully punches him many times. Without hesistations, his gun is obtained by Jaye. Tommy was speechless but continues to attack. Edan takes on 3 men. One swift kick and punch after another. Ice quickly assists Edan with an strong pound on a man's back. Noticing, CiCi runs over to aid Ice, fearing her over use of energy. Yuen settles with Sum, entertained. Hang, murmurs laughs and curses at them while working on his beatings. Together, Rain and Hang partners up. Out of everyone's expectations, Deci brutally tans a man unconcious. Hadn't Joe stop her, the man would have ended his life instantly.]

Joe[wraps his arms around the malacious Deci ]: Suet, no...he's unconcious already...[Deci still is trying to be released. Deci immediatly senses another being's attack. She pulls out her gun. Lucky Joe restrains her fast enough for Tommy or Jen to notice. Joe forcefully throws him off the ship] Suet...get a hold of yourself. What's wrong with you? We are not on a job now [he scolds]...

Ice[runs over]: What's with you? I saw all that. Fortunately, Rain and Hang was slick with the stalling on the two. I can't presume what will happen if they discover our true identity but only the condition of prison. [Deci, still looking like she wants to kill] Joe, don't let her be the ruiner...

Joe: I won't...

[not for long...the unwelcome visitors where either lying unconcious in the ship or off floating in the polluted water]

Jen[positions the aiming of her gun facing the floor]: Woooo...that was...

Ching: that was amazing! [stunned with joy] that was mad cool!

Ice: that was freaky and dangerous...

Yuen: be cool Ma...I'm with Auntie Ching.

Edan[goes over to Ice]: are you ok? I mean is everyone fine?

Tommy: yes...thank god nobody is hurt. [Deci is still trying to cool down and Joe is being watchful over her]

CiCI: what was all that about?

Hang: did one of you sent out other invitations that we don't know about?

Rain: very funny.

Tommy: how did you all learn how to fight like that?

[The question that can only result with a 'O' answer finally appeared. They all look at each other while Tommy and Jen wonders...]

Jaye: we all took martial arts classes together...for the fun of it...[tries to predict if they bought it..]

Tommy: Obviously, you all carry black belts or what? You guys sure know how to whip asses...

[by the exit of the police station...]
Tommy: you all can leave now...Jen and I are staying a little longer...

Jaye: Ok.. [They all greet them a good bye]

[outside of the station]
Ching: oh what a night...[Joe is carrying Sum as she sleeps on his shoulders and CiCi is holding onto Yuen.]

Edan: I still don't understand what hit us today.

Joe: could it have been....

Jaye: Try to think positive guys.

Rain: yes, it was nothing [trying to lighten up the situation]

Hang[being sarcastic]: oh sure, it was nothing...we had people suddenly shooting up the place and then completely ransacked the yacht upside down...sure it was nothing.

Rain[became serious]: will you die if you don't poke fun at me for just one freaken second? [bitterly walks ahead of everyone else...]

Ice[gazes at Hang's ignorance behavior and shakes her head at him, then catches up with Rain]....

Hang: what? what did I do?

[back at home...Deci settles quietly in her room]
Deci: what was I doing? What is happening to me? [she wants to cry aloud but fears
alarming the others therefore she sinks her troubled head into her hands..]

Joe[comes in]: Suet?

Deci: oh huh? Joe...it's you...

Joe: yes [worries] are you ok?

Deci[forces a smiles]: I'm alright. What's everyone doing outside?

Joe: oh...they're still discussing over what happened today. I'm sure no one can get over it yet.

Deci: uh huh...um Joe, I want to sleep now...

Joe: great, I'll see you in the morning...nite...[leaves]

Deci[takes her outer coat, she walks over to get a hanger...something drops out of her pocket. She picks the envelope from the floor. She finally remembers she had forgotten about her job in HK. This was her first time opening the letter. Her eyes expresses everything...shock and stun at the picture she hastily drops.]: this couldn't be....no, it's not happening...

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