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Copyright Tin Tin 2000 All Rights Reserved.
Fan Fiction by Tin Tin


Main Characters

Ice Wan Bing-Jessica Hsuan
Deci Wan Suet-Jessica Hsuan
Jaye Wan Wun-Joey Meng
Rain Wan Lum-Marianne Chan
Wan Seung-Vivian Leung
Wan Lui-Jacky Lui
Wan Law Mei-Lisa Wong
Edan Wong Sung Yuen-Louis Koo
Pit Wong Sung Tin-Wong Hei
Joe Chow Kin-Julian Cheung
Hang Lee Sing-William Lam
Tommy Lau Siu Man-Eric Wan
CiCi Kwok Yan Ci-Annie Man
Kwok Fung-Adam Cheng
Kwan Bik Yuk-Carol DoDo Cheng
Ha Ching-Wallis Pang
Jen Lam Bo Ming-Joyce Tang
Dylan Lam Bo Yau-Steven Ma
Lam Yuen-the vampire kid in MDWAV
Kyle Hoi Sueng Nam-Michael Tse
Sean Lee-Mark Kwok(not related to Hang Lee)


CHAPTER 20-TOMMY CHASES AFTER JAYE

[In Deci's home…]

Mei: How were you separated from us? [both Ice and Deci shakes their head for an answer] I still remember it so clearly. That night seemed darker then any other nights. It was our second time encountering a group trying to over throw us. Back then our organization was still very weak. We had to escape from all the other killers. I toke Bing and your father held onto Suet. We ran separate ways. We told each other to meet back at our usual place. I waiting long hours, your father never came back until it went past midnight. I watched him running toward our hideout, in blood and pain. He was severely injured. I was in shocked at the time because Suet was no where in sight and your father was dying. The last words he told me were to find Suet. [Ice and Deci are deeply touched from learning about his father] Therefore, I knew Suet wasn't killed during the run away.

Deci: I am so grateful to hear that I actually have mother, a twin sister and a father that I can live proud of.

Ice: Suet, why don't you come back and live with us?

Deci: I wish I can…I still have to meet back with my sisters.

Mei: I understand. I'm really sorry for causing all the pain you had to go through without parents. I couldn't do anything.

Deci: You did not have a choice mother. Therefore, you shouldn't be blamed.

Ice: Yes, Suet is correct.

Mei: I'm so lucky to have both of you with me now.

Deci: me too. [she takes the chance and holds on to them so tightly, she didn't want to let go.]

Mei: Saw Lui! I will take care of you and make up for the lost times.

[in Edan's apt…]
Hang: it's getting pretty late guys.

Joe: Suet said she would be back soon.

Rain: did she tell you where she was going?

Jaye: Or a time? [Joe shakes his head]

Edan: Let me trying calling Bing, maybe she knows.

[in the streets, the guys are driving..]
Edan: She's not at ah Bing's place. She said she left a while ago already.

Joe: where could she be?

Rain: don't worry, we're all spread out looking for her.

Edan: Even Bing is out searching.

[they all met back, downstairs of their building…]
Hang: We looked everywhere…

Edan: couldn't find her either.

Bing: this doesn't make sense. How can she suddenly disappear like this?

Jaye: her mood wasn't that great today.

Bing: no, not at my home.

Joe[shouts out]: Wan Seung!

Rain: what? [everyone looks around for Wan Seung…]

Pit: What are you talking about?

Joe: I thought the deadline was tomorrow. [everyone was confused at Joe] I won't hide it anymore. [he goes on telling them about the trap…]

Rain: I swear I'm sending that bitch to hell.

Bing: Wan Seung, isn't it?

Jaye: what has she done to my sister?

Joe: I knew I should have saved her in time.

Pit: don't blame yourself.

Edan: finding Suet is the important thing.

Bing: you should have told me earlier.

[Deci, heads down, walking toward the building…]

Pit: Hey, it's Suet.

Joe: Suet [yells across the streets]

Deci: Joe! [she runs to him]

Joe: you scared everyone.

Deci: Joe, I couldn't do it. I was walking around for hours, thinking I should flee to China. But I couldn't take the pain of being separated with you. I can't.

Joe: You are so crazy. That isn't a solution.

Bing: come on, go up first. Don't worry Suet, go home and have a good night rest. Everything will be taken care of. Guys, watch her. [she leaves; everyone didn't know what Bing was capable of doing.]

[the following day…Mei and Ice shows up at Bik's territory…]
Bik[coming out]: Well, well, what an honor to see my boss, Mrs. Wan.

Mei: good to know that you actually keep that in mind.

Bik: enough with the BS, what brings you here?

Mei: are you in charge of a killer name Wan Seung?

Bik: Seung? Why, yes. What have she done in resulting you to confront her?

Mei: oh, something she will be so sorry for.

Bik[speaks to one of her disciple]: notify Seung here.

Bik: and I'm guessing this lady next to you must be the well-known phoenix, your daughter! [Bing takes off her mask…]

Ice: And you must be the Fong Yuk Bik.

Bik[bewilders]: What? You, Wan Suet is actually your daughter?

Mei: Yes and no. Wan Suet is my daughter but this is not Wan Suet.

Seung[walks out]: Boss, what is it? [sees Bing and misinterprets her as Suet] Wan Suet, what are you doing here? So eager to be punished that you're saving me the trouble of playing hide and seek?

[Ice hovers toward, over powering Seung, grips onto her neck and thuds her against the wall. Confound, Seung tries to pulls our her gun but was unsuccessful.]

Seung[struggles]: who are you?

Ice: you're brighter then I thought and audacious enough to threaten my sister.

Seung: You're sister?

Bik[finagles over to Ice and Seung]: Now, now…calm down. She's just an ignorant little girl, didn't know she was messing with matches. [slaps Seung across her face] Apologize to….[looks at Ice] to…

Ice: Wan Bing.

Bik: Yes, to Bing Dai Siu Jah, which is A2 and A1, over there!

Ice: you're even faker then I imagined.

[Bik pretends to swallow that remark.]

Mei: Now, Bing, be nice to the elderly.

Ice: Yes, mother. [she stares back at Seung and forces her neck even harder]

Seung: Ahhh

Mei: Bing, let her go.

Ice: Mother! [she obeys; unwillingly releases her hand]

Mei: I think we have made our point.

Ice: I'll teach you to threaten my sister. Don't even let me see you again or you won't be able to see another sun rise.

Mei: Let's go. [takes off with Ice]

Seung: Boss! We are just going to let them go?

Bik: shut up! We can't fight them but I'm not going to let this slide.

[days later, they all hang out at Ice's place…]
Hang: tell us more…tell us how you played that obnoxious Wan Seung.

Pit: Hang!

Rain: No, I'm interested too.

Ice: I don't want to be that descriptive but I was likely to tear her apart if mother had not restrained me.

Deci: As much as I hate that woman, I guess she really doesn't deserve to die. She did teach me a few cool moves.

Ice: There will be plenty of chances for me to pass onto you, our family traditional kicks and punches.

Edan: it sounds great!

Ice: Let me emphasize on 'family traditions'!

Edan: Okay, okay, it was worth a shot.

Hang: I'm just jealous to know that you have such a cool mother.

Rain: Yeah!

Hang: finally agreeing with me?

Rain: Did I hear someone speak or was it the wind?

[They all started to laugh at them.]

Rain: I'm actually curious to see the pissed look on that woman's (her boss) face.

Ice: pretty ugly I should say.

Jaye: I'm just worrying if, if we went over board. She is still our boss!

Rain: Who cares. And don't tell me she has no idea what Seung was doing to Suet. She was probably even the accessory before the fact.

[outside of Edan's apt...]
Tommy[in neat attire, holding a dozen of roses in hand]: Wish me luck!

Jen[leaning by their apt door]: yeah yeah...

Tommy: what?

Jen[smiles]: Go for it! [smile fades...]

Tommy[brushes away dust on his shirt]: good looking and tidy...representable smile! okay, i'm ready...[he pushes the door bell] hmm...[he waits but no one answers] I wonder where..

Jen: oh, don't have to wonder anymore....

Jaye[shockingly, standing by the elevator when seeing Tommy]: Tommy?

Tommy[uncomfortable]: Um, Jaye! Hi!

Jaye: ah...What are you doing?

Jen: Proposing, what do you think? [shuts the door at Tommy]

Tommy: Jen! no, don't listen to her...

Jaye[both feeling embarrassed]: but i'm guessing it's something of that kind, isn't it?

Tommy[couldn't speak]:....

Jaye: Why don't you come in first....

[later the night....]
Rain: oh my god....I knew it!

Hang: Oh damn...

[everyone looks at Hang]

Rain: some how I knew that was coming too...

Hang: very funny...tell me you didn't...

Rain: tell me you did!

Jaye: hey, hey....stop it guys! I already feel bad about gossiping it like this to you all....

Deci: don't say as gossip...it's called sharing a conversation!

Jaye: oh please..

Joe: Tommy isn't bad at all...

Pit: Guys are you forgetting something...

Jaye: Thanks Pit, you're the only one with common sense!

Rain: What, what's the problem?

Hang: Ah ha! problem? Big problem...you're forgetting Tommy's a cop! And what are we? hahahha....

[they stare at Hang disgustedly...]

Edan: Are you feeling alright pal?

Hang: never been better! [he goes to his room while whistling..] YEs!

[everyone was laughing except for Rain...]

[Jaye meets Ice and CiCi to dine with]
CiCi: It's a good signal that you're still attractive!

Ice: The important thing is, do you have feelings for him?

Jaye: Well, he's really a nice guy.

Ice: but not your type?

Jaye: no...he's very entertaining at times...

Ice: but not your cup of tea?

Jaye: no...he's....

Ice: it's the height, isn't it?

CiCi: Bing! Let her finish, sheesh...

Ice: I'm ony joking! We know what you're trying to say...

Jaye: If only...

CiCi: If only, you're not who you are....I know how it feels...we're not suppose to engage a relation and definitely can't be in love...

Ice: I believe I failed on both...

CiCi: I'm not too pure myself...[the girls signs]

Jaye: but I know I will get my sisters out of this lifestyle, I just know i can...

Ice: wait, it isn't so hard...

Jaye: That's easy for you to say...you're the A2 and daughter of the boss, of the bosses!

Ice: don't worry, I'll see what I can do...

[Joe and Deci freely, goes on a date together...]
Joe: I wish we can do this more often...

Deci: me too...I haven't enjoyed a day with you, like i have today for too long.

Joe: Suet, I have something in mind. Let's quit...

Deci: Quit? it's easier said then done...

Joe[holds onto her hand]: before we reunited, life to me was nothing more then another coldblooded day...since you came back into my life, I had another reason to live for. I love you more then anything and I want the best to our future...

Deci: are we really going to have a future?

Joe: Yes, I will attempt to make one for us!

[days later...almost like a family day, Edan and Ice brings Sum and Yuen out...]
Edan[driving]: okay kids, how does Kentucky Fried Chicken sound?

Sum and Yuen: YAHHH! [clapping their hands...]

Ice: and then, we'll head over to ocean sea park(?)...

Sum and Yuen: Ho Yeah!

Ice: Edan, stop the car by that pharmacy...I need some over-the-counter stuff...

[Edan parks the car by the store...]

[inside the pharmacy...Ice goes to the cashier to pay for the medicine...]
Cashier: Here's your change, miss! [hands over the coins...]

Ice: Thank you...

Man[on the other side of the register area]: How much is this? [shows the cashier a magazine]

Cashier: $15, mister...

Man: okay...

Ice[thinks to herself]: That voice sounds so fimilar...[but leaves the thought, knowing that they are waiting for her in the car...]

[Edan opens the door for Ice...]
Ice: okay, I'm done! Let's go to KFC now!

Yuen[squinting at someone]:...

Edan[notices]: Yuen, what are you doing?

Yuen[embushed]: Daddy! [he departs the car out into the streets...running after someone....]

Ice[calls out]: Yuen! Yuen!







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