Free Will vs. Fate 我們的命運﹐殺手的故事
Copyright Tin Tin 2000 All Rights Reserved.
Fan Fiction by Tin Tin


Main Characters

Ice Wan Bing-Jessica Hsuan
Deci Wan Suet-Jessica Hsuan
Jaye Wan Wun-Joey Meng
Rain Wan Lum-Marianne Chan
Wan Seung-Vivian Leung
Wan Lui-Jacky Lui
Wan Law Mei-Lisa Wong
Edan Wong Sung Yuen-Louis Koo
Pit Wong Sung Tin-Wong Hei
Joe Chow Kin-Julian Cheung
Hang Lee Sing-William Lam
Tommy Lau Siu Man-Eric Wan
CiCi Kwok Yan Ci-Annie Man
Kwok Fung-Adam Cheng
Kwan Bik Yuk-Carol DoDo Cheng
Ha Ching-Wallis Pang
Jen Lam Bo Ming-Joyce Tang
Dylan Lam Bo Yau-Steven Ma
Lam Yuen-the vampire kid in MDWAV
Kyle Hoi Sueng Nam-Michael Tse
Sean Lee-Mark Kwok(not related to Hang Lee)


CHAPTER 21-He's really back!

[in the street, inside Edan's car..]

Ice: Yuen! [gets out of the car]

Edan: Bing! [wants to run after them but couldn't leave Sum behind]

Yuen[continues to follow the person whom he believe is his father]

Ice: Yuen, come back!

[Yuen was stopped from bumping into another person. He lost track of the man now.]

[in Ice's apt]
Ice: that's impossible! Yuen, it must have been an illusion.

Yuen: mom, I've kept father's picture by my side all my lifehow can I not recognize him?

CiCi: it's not impossible, remember Dylan's body was never found.

Ice: what are the odds? I don't believe Dylan will shut himself from me if he's been alive.

Yuen: something must have happened.

[Edan sat quietly on the sofa, pondering if he should comment]

Ice: I'm too confused.

CiCi: Let's calm down. Forget about it now, there's really nothing we can do until we find out if he still exist.

Edan[finally fount room to stick his mouth in]: Ci's right.

Ice: I'm hitting the showers[turns to Edan] feel free to do whatever you want

Yuen[gets up]: excuse me, I'll be in my room.

CiCi[feels Edan's unpleasantness]: umlike mother, like son?!

[Joe driving his car]

Joe: Look, I'm not trying to smack reality into your face. If you like Jaye you have to make your move buddy. Clearly, Tommy made a head start!

Hang: What do I have to worry about. He's a cop

Joe: Lieutenant

Hang: whateverit doesn't make a difference. Jaye knows better into accepting a relation that obviously can't get anywhere.

Joe: A reminder as well, we aren't supposed to be apart of a relationship in the first place.

Hang: then what are you doing? Hey, if I'm not the only one playing off the rules, what is there to fear!

Joe: okay, we can say that we don't have to play by the rules, then what are you going to do? Sit and wait till Jaye tells you she's with Tommy?

Hang: I said she wouldn't even consider Tommy.

Joe: Why are you so sure?

Hang: because

Joe: can't think of an excusable answer, huh?

Hang: I hate it when you're so damn right.

Joe: Hang, get to your senses. A right lady is hard to find. Especially when you know you loved her since we were kids.

Hang: hey, how did you know?

Joe: what? I was referring to myself.

Hang: Oh.

Joe: wait, you once said Jaye is Lan Mui from the orphanage. So is that why you're been obsessed with her ever since?

Hang: Well, duh!

Joe: come to think of it, are you sure about that too?

Hang: how many Lan Mui's can there be?

Joe: I personally feel you seem to match Rain even more then Jaye.

Hang: Eww, don't even say that. Have you forgotten I am water and she is oil?

Joe: hey, many relationships start out that way. Don't you watch movies?

Hang: I'm not listening[covers his ears]

[Joe purposely stops and jerks the car.]

Joe: Get out, non-listener!

Hang: What?

Joe: it's your stop

[Deci walks toward them and waves. Hang jokingly leaves the car]

Hang: no, I understand, it's her stop!

Joe: yes, if only you aren't so narrow minded with you know what. Now shoot!

Deci: Hi Hang! Hang, you're leaving?

Joe: oh yes he is. He needs to spend time alone.

Hang: right! Bye Suet! Joe! [he leaves]

Deci: where are we heading now?

Joe: anywhere you want to go.

Deci: let's go eat first.

Joe: good idea!

[in the streets]
[Ching is in a hurry, rushing to meet with Edan. Carelessly, she even crosses during the red light. Almost gotten hit by a car, she gets up shouting at the driver.]

Ching: Where did you get your license? Didn't you see me there?

Sean[comes out of his car]: I'm sorry. [examines Ching carefully.] Ah Wai?

Ching: oh my god, you know Ah Wai too? Well, I don't care. You almost got me killed.

Sean: you're not Ah Wai! It can't be. I kil.

Ching: you what?

Pit[runs toward them]: Hey, what do you think you are doing?

Sean: Pit! We meet again.

Pit: Ching, let's go. [holds onto Ching's hand]

Sean: watch out for her, don't get this one killed as well. [laughs]

Ching: What's going on? Oh, wait. I have to meet with Edan.

Pit: I know, we're been waiting for you.

Ching[she thinks](it's not only Edan and I? Damn.)

[days laterat Ice's apt]

CiCi: Bing, you've been staying at home for the past days. Shouldn't you at least give Edan a call?

Ice: I know, I know. I have too many thoughts in mind I don't want to bother him.

CiCi: or you don't want him to bother you?

Ice: Ci, learn to stop trying to be a smart-ass.

CiCi: fine.

Ice: and what about you?

CiCi: what about me?

Ice: We have to go through this ever time huh? Pit, what are you going to do with Pit?

CiCi: what am I suppose to do with him?

Ice: you're deeply in love with him.

CiCi: am not!

Ice: Denial, denial and denial.

CiCi: I'm telling you, he likes Ching.

Ice: you won't get anywhere with this attitude. In today's world, it isn't illegal for girls to make the first move you know!

CiCi: that's not the thing.

Ice: fine, I'm not pushing you. But I know her well enough, Pit isn't Ching's type. Hope that made you feel better!

CiCi: where is Ching anyway?

Ice: you know she's always out!

[at an orphanage]
Tommy: here, Siu Fay! [he passes out junk food to the group of children]

Siu Fay: Tommy Gor Gor, let's play seven-up!

Other kids: Yeah!

Jaye[doesn't notice Tommy yet]: can I play too?

Tommy: Sure, why not! [turns around to see who it is that he's speaking to] Jaye!?

Jaye: Hi!

[sitting together, watching the kids play]
Jaye: where do you find the spare time for both the orphanage and the retirement center?

Tommy: by making it part of my life!

Jaye: I see.

Tommy: you're obviously doing the same! I never had the chance to ask, what's your job anyway?

Jaye[eyes wandering off]: umhere! Over here, this is my job! I, umwork as a social worker for these kidsat the meantime.

Tommy: oh! That's great!

[at another distances.]
Joe: that Tommy is working pretty hard trying to get to Jaye!

Deci: No, he comes here himself occasionally.

Joe: oh, okay! Let's admit it. Hang is incomparable with Tommy! Not that I mean it, Hang is nothing more then a clown, jack-in-a-box.

Deci: He must have some good qualities!

Joe: well, you are right. We brothers are all very committed! Never a two-timer!

Deci: Hey, look at that! [points to 2 children] They are dancing! So cute!

Joe: Yes, reminds me of us!

Deci: exactly.

Joe[holds onto Deci's hands]: it also reminded me how happy we were back them as children. Suet, I want us to be happy again. [Deci looks into his eyes without speaking] Suet, let's get married!

[in Ice's apt.]
CiCi: Suet, you're been sitting her for a while. Do you want me tea?

Deci: no, I'm fine.

Ice: Suet, is there something wrong?

Deci: Ka Jah! Can you please help me with something.

Ice: this is serious. I'll do anything I can.
Deci: I don't want to be a killer anymore. I want to be normal, live peacefully with Joe.

Ice: I know mother can help you even more.

Deci: but will our bosses let? It seems impossible.

Ice: nothing is impossible.

CiCi: Human make rules. Human can change it.

Ice: yes that's right. Don't forget your mother is their boss.

[Ice's ICQ alarms inside her room.]

Ice: Kyle is replying.

Deci: what is it?

CiCi[skims through the message]: You asked him to search for Dylan?

Ice: yes[types back a reply]

[in a park...]

[The coldness of the weather, leaves a white colored smoke after every exhale. Bing and Edan sat on the swings, with one swing in between them. They sat in this position for the whole night, without letting out a single word to each other. With the warmest and most trustworthy eye stares, it was the only form of contact they needed to love and share. Up to now, even the most simplest thoughts in their minds are understandable and foreseeable with the helps of their hearts. Nothing seemed important because they are in the world of Edan and Bing....]

Ice[still staring at Edan](The best kind of friend is the kind you can sit in a park and swing with, never say a word, and then walk away feeling like it was the best conversation you've ever had....)

Edan[breaking the silence]: what are you going to do?

Ice: Kyle told you?! [Edan nods his head with a smile.] I don't know what will happen after tonight but nothing has changed between us. I still love you and I hope you do too.

Edan: I believe you.

Ice: I just need an answer. I need to know why.

Edan: don't worry, you will get an answer, hopefully!

Ice: what a small world. He ended up being a killer too. But it's sort of unbelievable for me. He was a police officer when I was with him.

Edan: don't strain yourself. Just let everything go smoothly.

Ice: I will.

[they leave together, hand in hand.]

[the next day]
[Edan drives Ice to the where Dylan is known to be located.]

Ice: Edan, wait for me here.

Edan: okay. [she gets out of the car and walks into a hotel building.]

[Ice recites the info Kyle gave. She gets off the elevator at the floor of Dylan's hotel room. She knocks on the door. No one replied.]

Ice: he should be in the building though. [she hears noises, therefore she rushes to hide around the corner.] Dylan! [she stares at Dylan's back.] It's really Dylan! [she mumbles to herself. She notice Dylan arguing with another man.]

Dylan: If I don't get any benefit, I'm going to blow his cover. For what I did for him, I deserve at least a percentage. And tell him I have a lot to blow!

Sean: You don't know what you're messing with, do you?

Dylan: Do I look like I care anymore. My life ended when he dragged me in.

Sean: You're the one who begged us to take you as a killer. Don't forget how miserable you described your life was. A job going no where, owing a huge debt. You should thank us for faking your death, you selfish.

Dylan: you shut up! Who do you think you are? I can even dump my family, what can I not do?

Sean: don't even say I didn't warn you. [he furiously leaves.]

Dylan: this guy thinks he's the boss or something. [realizes] Who is it? [Ice walks out]







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