Our Detective Investigation Files V
Copyright Tin&Marianne 1999. All Rights Reserved.

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Main Characters--actor/actress

Tsui Fei (Fei)----Louis KooTeen Lok
Mo Siu Kwan (Kwan/Quin)----Jessica Hester Hsuan Suen Huen
Law Duck Nam (Nam/Law Sir)----Jacky Lui Chong Yeen
Tom May Ming (May/May Ming)----Fiona Leung Iy Ling
Gong Chi San (Chi San/Gong Sir)----Sunny Chan Gum Hung
Fong Hoi Lun (Lun/Alan)----Willam Lam Ka Dong
Lum Chong Lian (June)----Marianne Chan Mui Ying
Cheng Huck (Vincent)----Francis Ng Chun Yu
Man Yuen Lan (Man)----Charmaine Sher See Man
Huan Kwok Yun (Korean)----Edmund So Chi Weh
Siu Gi Luam (Gigi)----Eileen Yeow Ying Ying
Mo Sum Oiy----"Pui Pui" from kindred spirit
Leung Chin Chin (Chin Chin)---Anne Heung Hoi Lam


Preview of Last Chapter: Everything is settled between Quin and Lun. Fei and Quin's relationship has mentally gone up one step further! May realizes something between her and Chi San.....


Chapter 20

AT QUIN'S APT....

Quin: What do you mean?

May: I want to break it off with Chi San.

Man: What? It's not because of me, is it?

May: No, don't worry. It's not you, not anyone. It's me and him. I have thought it over. I know what to do now. What I learned from your(Quin) incident is that, I don't want a force or unrealistic relationship. It's really not what I want in a relationship. We don't even look like a couple.

Quin: Well, if that's what you think and will do, I'll support you all the way. [Man was in silence]

May: Man, don't feel bad. It's the right thing to do.

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NEXT DAY...OUTSIDE OF QUIN'S BUILDING......all headed for the parking lot...

May: Quin, you drive Man, today. I have something to do.

Quin: Ok, see ya.

Man: Bye. [May drives off]

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IN MAY'S CAR....driving close to Chi San's building...

May [dials for Chi San]: No one's home?! [redials his cell #] Why isn't he picking up??

[while approahing near Chi San's building, a foot away she saw Chi San's car being droven off...]

May: Chi San's car. [she follows him, trying to catch up but unfortunately still distances away from his car....] [Chi San's car stops by the cemetery] I wonder what he's doing here? His wife? [Continues to follow him inside. Chi San holding a banquet of white roses, approaches Tong Sum's grave. While bending down to put down the roses, he hears foot steps. He turns around and was surprised to see May.]

Chi San: May, what are you doing here? [May walks up]

May: Don't get me wrong, I didn't mean to follow you here. I was looking for you but I couldn't reach you.

Chi San [takes out his cell]: Oh, there's no batteries. [puts it back in his pocket]

May: It's ok. I saw your car and wanted to catch up with you but I couldn't. So I followed you here. [May notices the pic on the tombstone]

Chi San: I'm sorry May.

May: No, Chi San, it's ok.

Chi San: It just so happens, after all these years, my long dead wife has became my best friend.

May: No, really I mean it. I don't mind. [smiles] It's quite usually for a woman not to mind, isn't it? What I'm meaning to tell you is that we are really not meant to be together. I took into many consideration before I came here. And I'm sure my thoughts aren't wrong. From the so many stories I have heard about you, Man and Tong Sum's past relationship and now seen by my own eyes, I know I have made the right decision.

Chi San: I think I know what you mean. But I'm sorry, it has to turn out this way.

May: No, don't be. Let me put it this way, we should not find any fault between both of us. Ok, let's just say, I never actually mentally accepted you. I'm not saying you're not good, it's just that I wasn't really ready or that you're not the person I'm looking for. So you don't have to feel responsible because we haven't loved each other.

Chi San: Yes, I understand now. It's better to break it off sooner than later.

May: Out of curiousity, why me? I kind of sense the reason but I want you to tell me.

Chi San: You really want to know? It's most likely not what you want to hear. But I know I was wrong to go after you because of Tong Sum.

May: Bingo, I had that answer in mind.

Chi San: You were so much like her. You made me retaste the moments I had with her.

May[joking tone]: Ok, basically I was an subsitute, huh?

Chi San: Sorry!

May: No, don't take it seriously. Like I said, I never accepted you. Nothing to be sorry about. But I feel I have to tell you something...

Chi San: What?

May: I do also sense that, Man never stopped loving you.

Chi San: Ahh, Man! [sign] You can say it this way, when the time is right!

May: Yes.

Chi San: Ok, Miss Tom May Ming, we will still be friends?

May: Tell me a reason not to be?! [They both smiled and chat together by Tong Sum]


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IN QUIN'S CAR.....

Quin [waving her hand]: Bye Man! [Man outside of her car, waving back. Quin drives off]

[Quin stops her car in the parking lot of Bik Yu mental hospital...walks in....stops infront of the information counter.....]

Quin: Hi, I came to visit, Fong Hoi Lun. May I know where his room is?

Clerk [starts to search in her computer]: Yes, let me see. Ah, in room 410.

Quin: Thank you. [Walks off...finally arrives infront of 410...she took a deep breath before she went in. In knowing that, all this that happened to him, she was the main cause which made her felt guilt. But she took her courage to face him and opened the door...]

Quin [surprised]: Fei? I'm surprised to see you here!

Fei: Hi! Well, I think you shouldn't be. I treat him as one of my friend now.

Quin: Did that talk contributed in what you are doing now?

Fei: You can say that. Like you said, love isn't always the way you want it. He is an example. I care for him because we both loved and still loves the same person deeply.

Quin [already staring at Lun thru the glass, she didn't want to make any reply to that statement, to not make him fantasize anything.]: He looks like he can see me. [smiles] I really wish him the best from now on. (I feel so much better, better cause the fact that Fei is with me to face my most feared fault. I feel I need him from now on, I need back his shoulders and his strong arms to protect me once again. But I know I can only wish while I'm wondering for it. I know for fact that he will be by my side from now on but I still feel wrong for that Chin Chin is the only one he should be protecting for. I can dream, can't I?!...)

Fei: Kwan! Why are you so quiet?

Quin: Just thinking. Look at the time. [raises her arm to glance at her watch] I have to go now.

Fei: Let me drive you.

Quin: No, it's ok. I have my car. [begins to walk out] So, I'll see you sometime. Bye.

Fei: Bye. (I can only watch her leave me again and again. I'm just greatful, she's not going to aviod seeing me. I feel so hopeless seeing her and the fact that nothing will change between us but the word, "Friend" which is said to be deeper. I'm more crushed than before but in our hearts, we know we love each other till the end of life....)


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AT THE HEADQUATERS.... [Chi San and May comes in]
Gigi: Hey, finished "pak tall"?

Chi San: Ok, everyone, I have something to announce. May and I are only friends from now on.

Korean: Aren't we all friends?! [paused] Oh, you're suppose to be serious?

May [shakes her head]: Yes, we are. We broke up.

Sue: Why are you guys so happy then?

May: We broke up because we knew our problem, we are better off being friends. That's it and all.

Korean: Well, not to say anything but you two never seemed like you were dating in the first place. In another words, don't act like a couple! Even Fei said so. [points]

Fei: Don't put words in my mouth. Ok, I agree. But since you guys are happy, so are we!

Everyone: Yes, yep! [Everyone got back to their positions and continued their work] [Minutes later...Fei comes out of his room....]

Fei: There's a phone call, a female body is found in Wan Chai.


AN APT. IN WAN CHAI.... [The guys enter the house of where the body is found...]

Nam [talking to other polices]: Where is the body?

Officer: Go straight into the first room on the left hand corner. [The rest went off but Sue and David stayed behind to do the questioning...]

[As they go in, they saw that there is someone doing the examining...]

Gigi: Oh my god. This is insane. There's blood everywhere. [May turned her head around, didn't even want to look at her surroundings...]

Gigi: Hey, they changed the medical examiner.

Korean: A woman? A pretty one tho.

Gigi: What's wrong with a woman. [Korean stayed shut] [June, turned to them as soon as she finished...]

Nam: Hi, nice to meet you. I'm Law Duck Nam. These are my fellow teammates.

June: Hello. I'm Lum Chong Lian call me June.

Chi San [stares at her for a minute]: Dr. Lum, have we meet before?

June: I doubt it. [smiles]

Fei: Dr. Lum, what do we have here? [Chi San began to take out his recorder]

June: This woman is between the age of 18-24. Indeed very young. There are obvious bruises on her which most likely meant that she has been abused and had struggled with the killer before. Just by looking underneath her, you clearly can see that she has been badly raped. [May took a glance and she became horrified, her face expression changed very uncomfortablely......]



Tin and Marianne: Is it really over with Quin and Fei? They are actually loving each other mentally! Is it better off that these two couples(Fei/Quin and May/Chi San) stay as friends? Who is this June? Is May overreacting? Say tune, Vincent Cheng will be introduced next....










Introduction and Character Descriptions

Chapter 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15

Chapter 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27

Chapter 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40