Our Detective Investigation Files V
Copyright Tin&Marianne 1999. All Rights Reserved.
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Main Characters--actor/actress
Tsui Fei (Fei)----Louis Koo Teen Lok
Mo Siu Kwan (Kwan/Quin)----Jessica Hester Hsuan Suen Huen
Law Duck Nam (Nam/Law Sir)----Jacky Lui Chong Yeen
Tom May Ming (May/May Ming)----Fiona Leung Iy Ling
Gong Chi San (Chi San/Gong Sir)----Sunny Chan Gum Hung
Fong Hoi Lun (Lun/Alan)----Willam Lam Ka Dong
Lum Chong Lian (June)----Marianne Chan Mui Ying
Cheng Huck (Vincent)----Steven Ma Chung Wai
Leung Teet Lok (Stanley)----Francis Ng Chun Yu
Man Yuen Lan (Man)----Charmaine Sher See Mann
Huan Kwok Yun (Korean)----Edmund So Chi Wai
Siu Gi Luam (Gigi)----Eileen Yeow Ying Ying
Mo Sum Oiy----"Pui Pui" from kindred spirit
Leung Chin Chin (Chin Chin)---Anne Heung Hoi Lam
Note: I added, 3 new characters. June played by Marianne, Vincent(I made a switch, if you had noticed) played by Steven Ma and finally Stanley played by Francis. Hope I didn't cause that much confusion, Thanks!
Preview of Last Chapter: May and Chi San has decided to be friends rather than lovers. Quin and Fei loves each other in their hearts. June is introduced into the story as a medical examiner in this rape case. May showed great comfortless and became startled in seeing in what disastrous has been done to this young female.....
Chapter 21
AT THE APT IN WAN CHAI..... (9:34 a.m.)
Nam [Turned over to May]: May?! May? Are you ok? [May was sweating and shaking frighteningly. Not for long her eyes became watery...]
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[A flashback scene in May's mind......] May: Ahhh. No. [being thrown on the bed]
A man: What are we waiting for? We have been together for a while. It's just on the matter of time. Com'on...don't make this as hard as it is....you know I love you no matter what. [Starts to approah May...]
May: No [May kicks and sways her arm at this man. She trys to grab anything she saw in site and finally got a hold of a glass bottle which made her slam it straight to his head. It broke his head. He got furious and started to put his hands on her. This man's strength took over May which made her vulnerable....
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Chi San [Shakes May's arms to wake her up...] May? May, what's wrong?
Everyone else: May?!
May: Huh? [Rubs her eyes and realized everyone is staring at her.] Oh, nothing. This is just the first time I dealt with a rape case. I need to go to the bathroom. [runs off]
Nam: May? [Couldn't stop her]
Gigi: May is acting quite weird today.
Korean: It's most likely, yuck, at this body. [turns away]
June: It's normal for people to have this kind of reaction. Like she said, this might be her first time having to deal with these cases. She'll probably get use to it. There's more to this, so I'll send a completed finally analysis to you as soon as possible.
Nam: Thank you.
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BACK AT THE HEADQUATER, THE DEAD'S MOTHER COMES TO AUTHORIZE HER.... (10:56 a.m)
[The man uncovers the body.....]
Mrs. Wan: Oh, my daughter. [Crying endlessly] Why my daughter?
Chi San: I'm sorry, Mrs. Wan for this tragedy. Please take care of yourself.
[Mrs. Wan still crying...]
May: Don't worry Mrs. Wan, we will try our best to find the killer.
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AT THE DISCUSSION ROOM...... (11:15 a.m.)
Korean [reads from a folder]: The dead is called Fannie Wan Wing Mun. At age 21, she is an college student. She is a good school girl. According to her only parent, her mom, she has no boyfriend or any male friends she finds suspenseful about.
Gigi: It's pretty sad. Her daughter being raped at their own apt. and she doesn't know until we contacted her. [signs] [Everyone used this moment to pity over this tragic..]
Nam: Ok, sent by Dr. Lun, it stated that the main reason which ended Fannie's life, were the broken glasses on her head. The wound gave her eternal bleeding. By the time the next door neighbor found out, it was too late.
Fei: According to this, then where did these glasses came from?
Gigi: From the surroundings leftover, we found 2 broken glass bottles. There isn't much evidence leftover by the killer but his semen. All over the house, it clearly showed that someone was wiping off fingerprints.
Fei: The killer must have been in a hurry to have left the door open too.
Nam: Ok, Fei or Chi San, give out orders to a duty. We need to locate all males that maybe have been involved with Fannie. The briefing ends here.
[Everyone started to leave, Nam holds back May...]
May: You having something to say to me?
Nam: Yes, I feel there's something wrong with you. Ever since this case started, you have been acting strangly. Is there something troubling you?
May: Thanks for being in concern, I'm fine! [May leaves]
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IN QUIN'S OFFICE...... (11:35 a.m)
[Knock knock...]
Quin: Come in.
Secretary [holding a dozen of roses] : Ms. Mo, these flowers are sent for you.
Quin: Hmmm, no, him again?! Thanks anyway.
Secretary [at a joking tone]: It's no surprise, you are smart and pretty, it's normal for bee's to stick all over honey!
Quin [kidding sense]: I thought you were leaving! [Secretary smiles and leaves] This guy just can't take a hint. [Takes out the card and reads it] From Stanley...oh god! I'll just ask Man to pick up Sum Oiy from now on. Her teacher is such a glue. [phone rings] Oh no, usually during these occasions, the guy calls to ask if you liked the flowers....[signs and picked up the phone] Mr. Leung, Thanks for you flowers but I think you must have misunderstood something. I, I [voice on other line interupts]
Nam: Oh well, well, I see my sis here finally moved on. See there are other people besides that Fei.
Quin: What? It's you?!
Nam: Disappointed, huh?
Quin: Yes, cause I might not have the chance, time and patients to tell this guy off again. You alway call at such a bad time. So what do you want, bro?
Nam: Well, I'm just worried about your friend.
Quin: Friend? Which friend, specificly?
Nam: No, it's not Fei. It's May that I'm worried about.
Quin: May, what is there to worry about May?
Nam: We just began a rape case today and she totally changed.
Quin: Well, it's not likely to hear that, she's not that weak. But truthfully, it's only her appearance. She may look tough but she's really not in the inside. I guess I can plan a chat with her. Lunch time looks good.
Nam: I guess.
Quin: Why so concern over May all of a sudden?
Nam: You know me, I'm caring for everyone. Ok, now what's wrong with that guy?
Quin: Please don't bug me now. He's been like a walking ghost every since.
Nam: Ok, ok, I'll back off. [They continue to talk.....]
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AT THE HEADQUATERS.... [Quin walks in..] (12:56 p.m)
Quin: Hello, everyone. [Smiled to everyone she saw.] I'm looking for May.
Gigi: Ms. Mo, May went to the bathroom.
Quin: Ok, I'll go look for her, thanks. [steps out, headed to the bathroom, on the way sees Fei coming...]
Fei: Hey, what are you doing here?
Quin: I'm looking for May.
Fei: Oh, I see. [no conversation seems to be brought up]
Quin: Well, I'll look for her now, so Bye! [walks off]
Fei [slowly saying]: Bye. [walks in]
[May comes along] Quin [hits May on the arm]: Hey, why are you daydreaming like this?
May: Oh, nothing. Really nothing. Why are you here?
Quin: Well, I have no one to go to lunch with, so you're my next best choice.
May: Ha, ok. So, whatever happened to that Stanley?
Quin: Please don't bring him up. Com'on, let's go.
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AT AN CHINESE RESTURANT THAT HAS "DIM SUM"..... [May and Quin are waiting on line.] (1:12 p.m)
Waiter: 54, who's number 54?
Quin: Oh, that's us, let's go May. [Drags May up with her to the waiter] Oh, we are 54. [Another waiter, leads them to their table..] Ah, I don't even remember the last time I actually went out to "Yum Cha". [Both sat down]
Waiter: What tea would you like?
Quin: May, what tea? I'm not good at these things.
May: Oh, "Bo Lay" please. [Waiter takes the order and leaves] [Seriously facing Quin] Quin, is there a reason why you asked me out for lunch today?
Quin: Ok, truthfully I don't want to lie to you. Nam is concern about you. [May with a "I don't like it" expression] He told me what happened to you today.
May: Quin, don't treat me as you clients.
Quin: I'm not. As your friend, I'm also worried. I wouldn't have done all this if I'm not your friend. Anyone who cares about their friend would do this, it's very casual.
May: I'm know, I'm sorry.
Quin: May, I don't want to here you say sorry, I just want you to tell me what's bothering you. It will make you feel better if you tell me.
May: Ok, I will but let me reassuring myself first. I need to order everything out to tell you. Let me go to the bathroom first. [Quickly walks straight to the bathroom...not knowing that she dropped her wallet...]
Quin: May, why are you in such a hurry to the bathroom? You're so clummy, you dropped you wallet. May!...[Quin followed her...]
[In the middle of the journey...May bumped into someone...]
May [looked up at who she had ran into... and in shockness...]: Oh my...
Vincent: May Ming? Is you? [Quin comes along..]
Quin: May, you dropped...[Saw Vincent...] Hey, Vincent. Long time no see.
[Vincent couldn't say a word and just stood there...]
Quin [looked at both May and Vincent, saw that something is wrong]: What's going on? Why are you two acting like this?
[May couldn't control her behavior and actions anymore and ran out of the resturant...]
Quin [confused]: May? May, where are you going? [Wanted to run after her but had to slowdown to get their bags back..]
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BACK AT THE HEADQUARTERS.....(1:58 p.m)
Korean: What are you listening too?
Gigi: It's my new Ekin cd.
Korean: Ewww, Cheng Yee Kin...[takes a cd out] Here, now this is real music.
Gigi: What can be better than Ekin. [Snatches the cd from Korean's hand] What? The Grasshoppers? They are so outdated.
Korean [Flings his hand at her]: Hmmm, bad taste. {Hmmm, um sick for}
Gigi: If you badmouth about Ekin once more, I'm not going to talk to you.
Korean: Ok, Ok. But if you want to listen to him, I suggest you go to the bathroom. We all don't want to hear it. Who agrees, raise you hand... [Everyone quickly raised their hands, the worst thing is that, Korean raised both of his legs too...]
Gigi: Stupid, Korean. [Korean laughs] Hmmm, so I will go to the bathroom. And what?! [On the way, smacks Korean with his Grasshopper cd...]
Korean: Hey, watch out, it's priceless.... [Minutes passed...]
[Quin comes running and accidently ran into Fei..]
Fei: Kwan, what's wrong? Why are you in such a rush?
Quin: Have you seen May?
Fei: I think she came back.
Quin: Is she inside?
Fei: No, I don't see her there. [Runs off, Fei was wondering what's all the fuss about....]
[Quin walks around the station looking for May, suddenly saw May coming toward...]
Quin: May? There you are. [May turned away and ran...] May? [May went into the bathroom, Quin went in after her...]
Quin: May, what's going on?
May: It has to do with Vincent.
Quin: What?
May [out of anger]: He raped me. He raped me!
Quin [was shocked and began to cry....] I'm your best friend, and I didn't even know you went thru such horrifying incident. I'm not worth being called your friend. You where always there, for everything, when I needed you and I didn't even know this.
May: Quin, don't be so silly. I'm not blaming you. You had nothing to do with this.
Quin: But, you wouldn't have to suffer so much alone if I knew and If I were there for you... [Gigi in one of the bathroom stalls, took off her earphones because of the noises she think she is hearing...] I feel so bad. [Still crying.]
May: Quin, it's over. It's not your fault, you should blame the raper. It's alright now. Now, wipe your tears and let's go out. Let's get some fresh air outside. [They did so and went out..]
Gigi [came out of the stall]: Oh my god. [upsettingly walks out and then into the room...]
Korean: Hey, why do you look like that? [Fei came out] Why you Ekin cd broke? [laughs]
Gigi: Shut up.
Korean: Sorry, then what's wrong?
Gigi: Oh my god. [Gigi noticed that Fei is in the room too, she began to hesitate]
Fei: Gigi, what? If you need to say something, say it.
Gigi [slowly uttering]: Ahhh
Fei: Huh? What is it about?
Gigi: I was in the bathroom and I heard parts of Ms. Mo and May's conversation...
Korean: Gigi, get to the point.
Fei: Just say it.
Gigi: Ms. Mo may have been RAPED...[Fei spread his eyes widely and was traumatized....]
Tin and Marianne: Sorry guys that I have to stop here! Oh my god!!! This Gigi just confused everyone. Her little misunderstanding may affect Fei badly. Now, how is Fei going to react this to Quin? What is he going to do now that he believes that Quin was raped? What else is he going to think of Sum Oiy? Gotta stay tune....
p.s. What is the whole story between May and Victor? Who is actually this Stanley now? Please comment on anything about the new characters and this explosion misunderstanding.... Thanks! Waiting for responses!
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