Our Detective Investigation Files V
Copyright Tin&Marianne 1999. All Rights Reserved.

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Main Characters--actor/actress

Tsui Fei (Fei)----Louis Koo Teen Lok
Mo Siu Kwan (Kwan/Quin)----Jessica Hester Hsuan Suen Huen
Law Duck Nam (Nam/Law Sir)----Jacky Lui Chong Yeen
Tom May Ming (May/May Ming)----Fiona Leung Iy Ling
Gong Chi San (Chi San/Gong Sir)----Sunny Chan Gum Hung
Fong Hoi Lun (Lun/Alan)----Willam Lam Ka Dong
Lum Chong Lian (June)----Marianne Chan Mui Ying
Cheng Huck (Vincent)----Steven Ma Chung Wai
Leung Teet Lok (Stanley)----Francis Ng Chun Yu
Man Yuen Lan (Man)----Charmaine Sher See Mann
Huan Kwok Yun (Korean)----Edmund So Chi Wai
Siu Gi Luam (Gigi)----Eileen Yeow Ying Ying
Mo Sum Oiy (Sum Oiy)----"Pui Pui" from kindred spirit
Leung Chin Chin (Chin Chin)---Anne Heung Hoi Lam



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Preview of Last Chapter: Quin is sent to the hospital immediately. Later after a long period of surgery, she is said to be in a coma. How long, no one knows yet. Chin Chin's jealousy suddenly blew out, causing Fei to me in the middle, not knowing what else to do. Even tho Stanley is truely dead, there is still a whole line of secrets untold. It so happens, they believe that Quin knows some. Vincent goes to May to find out more about Quin's condition. They are about to leave for the hospital.....


Chapter 28

AT THE HEADQUARTERS...[May comes back in]
May: Vincent, we can go now.

Vincent [turned to May]: Oh, right. Great. [Both walks off]


IN THE HOSPITAL.... [Nam, May and Vincent is inside Quin's patient room...]
Vincent: Did the doctor mention when she will wake up?

Nam: No, he doesn't even know for sure himself.

May: I'm still so unset. I can't wait until she wakes up. I want to know more behind the truth. [signs and sat next to Quin, holding her hand..] There are still so many unanswered questions. What actually lured Quin into doing all this? It seems like she knows more then we, alot more.

Vincent [felt a cold shiver down his spine]: Really? What do you think she knows that we don't know?

May: If I knew I wouldn't be so frustrated now.

Vincent[Felt alittle relieved]: Ah, yeah.

Nam: May, it's getting late and look at you. Let's go home now.

May: Ok, ok. [May got up and Nam lead her out. Vincent still stood there and starred.] Vincent, aren't you leaving too?

Vincent: Oh, yes, I'm leaving. [Slowly approahes his way out]


IN QUIN'S APT.....[Man and May sitting on the couch]
May: That's basically everything. But I'm sure there's more that we don't know, until Quin wakes up... [signs]

Man: You must be exhausted. You almost.... I really can not take 2 attacks in a day. I just don't know how to tell Sum Oiy. She isn't dumb. I was stammering when she asked me today. What should we do?

May: We aren't going to lie, that's all I have in mind. She will know the truth.

Man: And I have consulted Quin's aunt. She is coming back ASAP. While Ah Kit will stay and take care of Quin's dad, [Sum Oiy suddenly came out of her room, half awake.]

Man: Sum Oiy, what are you doing up?

Sum Oiy [Starts to cry]: I miss Mommy, I want to see Mommy. [She walked over to Man and May...May hold on to her tight.]

May: Sum Oiy, listen to Auntie May, Mommy is sick, so she can not see you yet. If you want mommy back, you have to be a very good girl. [Man wepted Sum Oiy's tears away.]

Man: Mommy will be back very soon.

May [to Man]: We promised Quin that we will take care of Sum Oiy for her, so no matter what, it's not going to change. But I have another thought. Quin's last words, she urges Fei to get Sum Oiy's trust and respect. I have to see that, that promise will be done. For that to happen, we have to help Fei alittle bit.

Man: Meaning create father and daughter times?!

May: Most likely, yes! [looked at Sum Oiy] Sum Oiy, do you want mommy to come back sooner?

Sum Oiy [pouting]: Yes.

May: If so, you have to do what mommy wants most. You can make mommy feel better, if you listen to her. You know that mommy wants you to call Fei Shuk Shuk, daddy, right? [nodds her head.] So, you will listen, right?

Sum Oiy: Yes.

Man: The reason is that, Fei Shuk Shuk is really you daddy. I thought all children wants a father. Give daddy a chance and then you will have both Mommy and Daddy. Don't you want that?

Sum Oiy:..............

May: I'll take that as an Yes. [huggs Sum Oiy]


THE NEXT MORNING...[Man and May had made arrangements for Fei to go out with Sum Oiy, by giving them time together...they brought Sum Oiy to Fei's apt.]
Fei [opens the door, seeing May and Man, he looks down, seeing Sum Oiy]: Sum Oiy! [smiles] Come in.

May: No, that's not necessary. We have to go. Take good care of Sum Oiy. Just give us a call on how you will sent her back.

Fei: Oh, don't worry. I have Chin Chin with me. She'll be fine. Thank you guys. I really appreciate this.

May [smiles]: It's for everyone's benefit. Ok, I just want to remind someone, Sum Oiy is Quin's daughter and will always be Quin's daughter. Meaning no one and I really mean no one can take her place. [made a stare at Chin Chin. She left with Man]

Fei: Chin Chin, don't mind her. She's just protective of Kwan.

Chin Chin: Don't I know that.

Fei[giving all her attention to Sum Oiy]: Sum Oiy, what do you want to do today? Anywhere you want to go?

Sum Oiy: I only want to see Mommy.

Fei: Sum Oiy, you have to understand. You are too small to go to the hospital. Mommy will come back very soon.

[Sum Oiy nodded her head, soon saw that Chin Chin is eating cheese cake. Fei noticed it and seized the moment..]

Fei: Sum Oiy, are you hungry? Do you want some cheese cake?

Sum Oiy[with a curious look]: Cheese cake, how does it look like? [Fei holding on to Sum Oiy's hand, brought her over to the kitchen table. Fei lift her up on to the chair, while she takes the peek.]

Fei: It's like this. So, do you want some?

Sum Oiy: No, mommy doesn't eat this kind of cake. She always eat the one with alot of brown crust on top. I only eat what mommy eats. [shook her head and pouted her lips.] [Chin Chin made a stare at Sum Oiy and slowly turned back.]

Fei: Oh, that's coffee cake. But aren't you too young to eat anything consisting of coffee? But since you like it, I'll go buy you it.

Chin Chin [walking up]: Yeah, Fei. Go get it. Don't worry, I'll watch her. I think Sum Oiy and I will really get along. [Pats Sum Oiy's head. Sum Oiy made a face at her and swepted her hand away from her head. Chin Chin can only force a smile and kept her hand to herself. Fei trust Chin Chin fully and decides to leave Sum Oiy with her. Beside it's only going to be alittle while, he doesn't intent to disappoint doing anything for Sum Oiy now that he has a chance.]

Fei: Ok, I'm going to go now. Be good here with Auntie Chin Chin, ok Sum Oiy!? [She nodded her head.]

Sum Oiy: Thank you, da..... thank you daddy! [Fei feeling all smushed and crushed inside, didn't know how to expressed his happiest. He finally heard what he has been longing for out of his daughter. Such good words to make his day. He couldn't hold it anymore and ran over to give her a big hug....]

Fei: Oh, thank you so much. I'm so happy now. Daddy promises you that I will never leave you and your... [almost forgot about Chin Chin's existences] I'll be the greatest father you can ever have. I'll make it all up to you. You will always have a daddy. [got up and hold on to Chin Chin's arms.] She called me Daddy. She finally called me daddy. Did you hear that. She really called me daddy. [kneed back down and hugged] Ok, my good daughter, I will go get you the cake now. [head his way out, contantly mumbliing those words "She called me daddy", over and over.. Chin Chin can only let out a unpleasant jealous expression....]


IN MAY'S CAR.....
Man: I hope it worked out between them.

May: Yes, me too. I know Quin will be very greatful.

Man: Oh, May, drop me off here [pointed at a book store.]

May: Ok,

Man: May, you don't have to wait for me. Just keep in contact. [Man gets out of the car. May waves a good bye]


IN THE BOOK STORE.... [As Man walks in, the store owner starts to give her the daily greet.]
Lo Ban Leung(store owner): Wei, today alot of new books arrived. They are all stacked over there. [points]

Man: Thank you. [Man heads to another book section. Took out a book.]

Lo Ban Leung [comes over]: Sorry if I'm too noisy but I really don't understand why everytime you come here, you take a look at this book but never buy it? You seem to like it alot.

Man: You won't understand.

Lo Ban Leung: This is a very good book. I read it many times. I just fell very bad for that girl who is in love with the detective. "Yue Yun Mung Wah", such a good title. Wonder why Ms. Tong Sum Yue didn't continue her story. Anyway, it's just a story.

Man: No, it isn't just a story. Believe me it's as real as it can be.

Lo Ban Leung: Ok. [paused to think for a while.] Wait, I just remembered something. While unpacking the new arrival books, I remember seeing a book with the same title, "Yue Yun Mung Wah". Oh, that's great then. Most likely a second part to the first one. She did leave an opened ending.

Man: What, what are you talking about? Can't be possible. [She ran toward the new books and started to search for the book. After a while, she found it.]

Lo Ban Leung: See, I told you. It's there.

Man: I don't believe this. [She carefully examined the book. It clearly said the second part of "Yue Yun Mung Wah". She was stunned. She turn the book to the back and looked for the author's name......]



Tin: What does Vincent have in mind, now that he knows Quin is in a coma? What can he do? It looks like it's really going to work out between Fei and Sum Oiy. How will Chin Chin react? Why is there a second part to Tong Sum's novel? What is it all about? Stay tune....


*****What is going on? Who is trying to kill Quin? Why? Will this incident lead Quin closer to her death? Is Sum Oiy lying or is it the truth about what she says? Who is after CHi SAn now? Will Chi San and Man recover their long gone relationship? Is knowing who made the continuation of Tong Sum's book going to be important? To be continued.....







Introduction and Character Descriptions

Chapter 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15

Chapter 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27

Chapter 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40