Our Detective Investigation Files V
Copyright Tin&Marianne 1999. All Rights Reserved.
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Main Characters--actor/actress
Tsui Fei----Louis Koo
Mo Siu Kwan----Jessica Hsuan
Law Duck Nam----Jacky Lui
Tom May Ming----Fiona Leung
Gong Chi San----Sunny Chan
**Fong Hoi Lun----Lam Ka Dong<-------------new
Man Yuen Lan----Charmaine Sher
Huan Kwok Yun----Edmund So
Siu Gi Luam----Eileen Yeow
Mo Sum Oiy----"Pui Pui" from kindred spirit
Leung Chin Chin---Anne Heung
Preview of Last Chapter: Two burnt bodies were found which made everyone panic. But, later was proven to be nor Quin or Lun. The guys went out all their way to find Quin and save her from a lunatic. After a while, Fei finally found Quin inside a box in a storage room at the airport. When he opened the box, he saw Quin unconscious which made him thought on the wrong side. He weeped by her side....
Note: Sorry, I wasn't able to finish the chinese translation. It would have took me longer.
Chapter 19
AT THE AIRPORT, IN THE STORAGE ROOM..... (12:12 p.m.)
[Minutes later he felt something, the box shook alittle] Fei [got up and looked in it]: Kwan, you're alive! {Kwan, neigh mo see ah!} [Looked around, shooked her head, trying to get herself back together. She saw Fei. She got up and..... at the same time together.....]
Quin and Fei [quickly hugged each other, both in tears]: I thought I will never see you again. {Or yee wei yee how dou kin neigh um dou}
Fei [bursting with words from his heart]: Kwan, I got so scared, so scared I cried. I didn't want to lose you. I really care so much about you. I can't live without you. I want you to know, you are very important to me. This is the worst thing that ever happened to me. All I could think of is you. {Kwan, or ho gang, gang dou hom. Or um sueng sit hau neigh. Or jung hai ho gwan sum neigh. Or um hall yee mo jar neigh. Or sueng neigh gi, neigh dau or how jong yui. Or jing hai lum neigh yut gor.}
Quin: Me too. {or dou hai}[then she realized that this is wrong] (Fei, we can't do this. I promised to myself that I will not take part into your triangle once again. I can't. I don't want to hurt anyone, hurt Chin Chin. You have already chosen her. But I will still love you so much..... {Fei, or day um hall yee gum ga. Or ying sing gi gay, or um wei joy dou chine hai neigh knee gor som(3) kwok luenn gwan hai. Or um hall yee. Or um sueng joy suang(hurt) hoi yum hall yan, suang(hurt) hoi Chin Chin. Neigh yee ging gone jor Chin Chin. Don hai or jun hai how oaw neigh.....})
Fei: I promise you, I will never let anything like this happen to you again. The one I care, worry, and that makes me hurt the most has been always you. I promise, I will never leave you.... {Or ying sing nei, or um wei joy bay neigh fat sung knee dee see. Or gi gwan sum, gi dom sum, tung mai gi tung sum gor goar hai neigh. Or ying sing, or umm wei joy lay hoi neigh....}
Quin [pulled herself away from Fei, shaking her head]: Do you even know what you are saying? Please don't lie to me. You already made these promises to the one you say you truely loved already. Why are you saying it again, again to me? I don't want to hear anything you don't mean. Even if you do mean it, it can't happen. And you know it. We can not hurt Chin Chin, I won't do anything to hurt her again. Remember, you owe her too much.
{Neigh gi um gi neigh gong gun mut yeah ah? Neigh mo joy bay hay mong or la. Neigh yee ging ying sing jor neigh jun ging gi oaw gor goar. Neigh deem guy joy gong, neigh guy joy tung or gong? Or um sueng thang di um jun sut gor suet wah. Zhoa suen hai jun ga, dou um hall yee fat sung. Neigh dou gi ga. Or day um hall yee suang hoi Chin Chin, or um wei jo yum all ya ling dou suang hoi Chin Chin ga la. Gay duck, neigh zang(owe) Chin Chin tai dall la.}
Fei: Kwan, I know, I know. But so much has changed since you left and she came back. Chin Chin has changed and so have I. It's just not the same. I tried to forget you but I can't. I even bought the house that we were planning to buy for our marriage. All these years, I have been cherishing our moments in there, in that house that resembles only you and me. I owe Chin Chin but I also owe you, maybe even more. I have done more than leaving you a scar, but a scar that stayed with you all these years. I just can't bear to hurt you anymore. I don't want to secrete {to hide of conceal} my feelings for you anymore. I know you feel the same too. {Kwan, or gi, or gi. Dan hai ho dall yeah dou um tung siy la. Chin Chin yee ging been jor, or yik dou been mai. Yee ging um yut yeung la. Or yau tueng see mong gay neigh, dan hai or um hall yee. Or chong mai jor or day boon loy wei mai lay kit fun gor gan oak. Gum dall nean lay, or day di hoi sum ga yut tea, or dou buy siy jup been, gor gan oak hai doy bue or tung neigh ga. Or zang Chin Chin ho dall, don hai or yik dou zang neigh tai dall, sum gi gun dall. Or jo dall gor lau diea ga bar hun bay neigh, don hai, yee ging hai yut gor lau heung neigh gum dall lean go bar hun. Or um hall yee joy suang hoi neigh ga la. Or dou um sueng joy yun moon or due neigh ga gum kwok. Or dou gi neigh dou hai gum lum ga.}
Quin: I know. It's has been difficult with me also. But nothing is going happen. We have to homage {to respect} Chin Chin. I want you to forgot what you had said to me. I truely want to see you and Chin Chin living happily forever. {Or gi. Or gum dall lean dou ho sun fu. Don hoi, mo yeah wei fat sung ga. Or day dou yui juen chong Chin Chin. Saw yee, or sueng neigh mong gai or day yee ga gong gor a yeah. Or jun sum sueng nei tung Chin Chin bak tou dou low ga.}
Fei [Holds Quin's hands] No, I can't. The fact that I know you had me in your mind all the time, I just can't. I saw, I really saw it. You kept every single thing I gave you. The jar of stars, the skeleton ring, the crystal rubber ball, the planner, and etc. Everything, you never threw it away. Why? Because you still love me. I can't do it to you again.
Quin: Yes, you can. We have stepped into two different worlds. Just, just ignore everything you saw. I just want you to know that, as long as we cherished and kept each other in our hearts, that is enough for me. {Neigh hall yee ga. Or day yee ging been jor sung wood heung lueng gor sai gay ga yun . Neigh mong gay sai saw yah neigh keen dou ga yeah. Or jing hai sueng neigh gi, or day sum yup been yau jerk tai ka, yee ging due or la gong, hai juk gow ga la.}
Fei: Kwan, please calm down. {neigh mo gum gick dong la} [Quin fainted again, on Fei's shoulders] Kwan? Kwan? [Fei lifted Quin up and ran out immediately.] [While running out, something dropped on the floor. Fei turned his head down to look. It was his box of Gum Miu Peen.] Kwan had it all along, she was holding it all that time. {Yuen loy Ah Kwan, yut tik thah dew(holding it).} [felt surprised and shocked. He felt so bad at the same time.]
[May and Chi San came in] May: Quin?! Oh my god, Fei what happened to her?
Chi San: Bring her to the hospital first.
AT THE HOSPITAL..... (1:34 p.m.) [Everyone, Fei, May, Chi San, Man, etc., even Chin Chin were waiting outside....]
[The doctor came out of the emergency room, Fei ran up...]Fei: Doctor, how is the patient?
Doctor: The patient now is at a stable level. But she still hasn't woke up yet. It's only on the matter of time. The cause of this was that she was in a postition with the lack of oxygen which triggered her asthma. I urge her family members to watch out for her before another asthma attack reacts, which I believe will be very dangerous the next time it does happens. Hopefully you can take good care of her.
Fei: I understand doctor but can I see her now?
Doctor: Yes, you can but only a few people at a time please.
Fei: Thank you. [Fei quickly followed in.]
IN QUIN'S ROOM..... [Fei, May, Man, Nam and Chi San went inside.... the rest of the guys looked thru the transparent glass to view....]
Fei [grabed and holded on to Quin's hand]: Kwan, it's all over now. You are going to be ok. Please wake up. You didn't finish listening to what I have to say.
May: Fei, I think Quin empathizes{to understand ones feelings} you.
Fei: I know. I know and understand what she said and will say to me again. But now I have another thought out reply to tell her. I think she will want to hear this even more. Like she said, as long as we have each other in our hearts, that's enough. [Man and Chi San made a smile with each other] [starting to turn his body facing the others. acting very serious...]By now, I believe between Kwan and I, there is nothing hidden in the eyes of you guys. Truthly on the way to the hospital, and then the wait outside the ER, I had many thoughts. I thought over everything Kwan said to me. I truely now understand her intentions. I don't want to hurt her anymore, so I will do as she wish.
Man [noticed something..]: Hey, Quin?! She's smiling. She's awake... [They all turned to her]
May, Chi San, Nam and Man: Quin! [Fei and Quin stared at each other and slowly hugged each other.]
Quin: Thank you Fei. I'm so happy to hear this.
Fei [in knowing that no matter what he says, she knows Quin will not change her mind]: I also want you to know that no matter how far apart we are, you will always be the fire burning in my heart. [Fei whispered it into Quin's ear]
Quin: Thanks, we will always be the best of friends. [She looked up] That goes for all 6 of us. [Everyone smiled with each other]
May: I'm so glad, you both are happy about this. We'll all be greatful!
OUTSIDE OF THE ROOM.....
Korean: Hey, look at them. They are so happy. Wonder what they are saying inside.
Sue [whispering to Gigi]: Do you guess they are back together?
Gigi: I don't know. [Chin Chin felt bad and uncomfortable about this]
[Everyone but Fei came out of the room....]
Nam: Ok, guys! Quin, is alright now. I think she needs to rest. Let's go back to the station now.
Everyone: Yes, Sir!
Man: Chin Chin, let's go. [Helped Chin Chin on her way out]
AT THE STATION.... [on the way back into their room..]
Chin Chin: Man, I have to go to the bathroom.
Man: Let me help you.
Chin Chin: No, it's ok. I can help myself. [she heads off] [everyone sat down]
Gigi: I feel so bad for Ms. Mo having to put up with all this. Thank god we caught that nut case and saved Ms. Mo in time.
Sue: What happened to him anyway?
David: The other officers said, he survived his own attack. What bad news. This lunatic brought so many troubles for everyone, he deserves to die. [Chin Chin came back out, on his way hearing the guys chit chat, so she stopped to listen by the hall...]
Korean [loudly]: But the worst thing is, after all this, the result for Fei and Ms. Mo is still the same. I really don't believe it, even a blind person can tell Fei loves Ms. Mo so much and the other way around.
Chi San: Yes, May and I truely saw it. We heard bits and pieces of their conversation outside of the storage room. They do truely love each other.
Korean: So what's the problem?
Gigi: Did you lost your memory or something? Chin Chin is their problem.
Korean: Oh, yeah! I do pity her alot but when you talk about love, people should not be so stubborn and should know when to let go.
May: You can't say that. Like Quin kept on saying, responsiblity counts alot too. The reason is that she doesn't want to hurt Chin Chin.
Man: Yeah. Being her sisters, we do understand her. This is what she wants all the time.
Gigi: But, no matter how you see it, I really think Fei and Ms. Mo matches the best. It's such a pity.
Chi San: Don't worry, they are happier like this now, after they cleared everything. [May later realized Chin Chin's shadow outside and made a signal to everyone...]
Korean: Ah, what will happen to Fong Hoi Lun? [specificly changing the subject]
Gigi: I, I think he should be heavily punched. [Chin Chin sensed that they know she's outside so she depressedly ran out...]
Man: Chin Chin?! Chin Chin. I'll follow her.
[Minutes later] Nam [came in]: Guys, let's go. Fong Hoi Lun woke up. [Fei walked in behind him]
Fei: Good.
ALL ARRIVED OUTSIDE OF LUN'S ROOM.....
Doctor: I have to warn you, he is very unstable. I have examined him, he is proven to be mentally ill. I don't believe you can communicate with him anymore. He won't talk in any sense.
Korean: What, then most likely the jugde is going to lighten his sentence. He's just going to be sent to the mental hospital. This is so unfair, unfair for the 3 innocent people who died because of him.
Fei: Calm down. I agree with you but I somehow pity him after a long talk with Kwan. [to the doctor] Can we go in now?
Doctor: Yes. [they all went in and evalutated Lun thru the glass window, they saw that Lun was acting very erratic {irregular; abnormal}
Gigi: What do you guess he is doing?
Korean: Playing talking to thin air?!! [They all watched]
Lun: Kwan, let's build a sand house! Com'on!
May: He really loves Quin. That is what he use to do with Quin alot.
Nam: It's quite sad. He loved someone the wrong way which ended everything he had.
Fei: Atleast now he will always remember all the good times he had with Kwan inside and be happier like this. [began to head his way out]
Chi San: Who are you and what have you done with our Fei?
Fei [smiled]: It's Kwan who made me understood.
AT HOME, IN FEI'S APT......
Fei [just came home]: Chin Chin?! Where are you?
Chin Chin: You are finally home.
Fei: Chin Chin, I hope you don't mind. There's nothing between Kwan and I but friends.
Chin Chin (I'll play dumb if I have too. I'm not going to let loose on the man I love. Even if it means I'm lying to myself. Not after what I did, never....): Ok, I believe you. I made food. You must be very hungry after all this. Come over and eat.
NEXT DAY....AT THE HOSPITAL...
Quin: Thank god, the doctor is letting me leave today. I think I might have died of boredness if I stayed here any longer.
May: As long as you are ok now.
Man: Yeah, and Sum Oiy really wants to see you.
Quin: Yeah, I missed my baby. Do you guys help me take good care of her?
May: It's your doughter, what do you think?
Man: Don't you think we aren't afraid of you, missy?!
Fei [came in and knocked on the door]: Are you done yet?
Quin: Almost. Hey, what are you doing here?
Fei: Came to visit, what do you think?
Quin: I'm leaving.
Fei: I know. That's why I'm asking if you're done yet!!!
May: It's ok, I droved my car today.
Fei: Ok, I guess I won't be needy today.
Quin: Ha, but then again, I have to thank you for saving me all the time. Wonder if I will have a chance to save you?!
Fei: Ok, let's see! Oh, almost forgot. [takes out his "gum mui peen"] You keep this.
Quin: What is this? A farewell present?
Fei: Whatever you like it to be.
AT QUIN'S APT....
Quin: It's good to be home. Hey, I'll pick Sum Oiy up today and surprise her.
May: That will be good. Oh, forgot to tell you. Go get her a teddy.
Quin: Ok. Oh, I guess after a few days, I go visit Ah Lun and see how he is. I feel very bad to see him lose everything he had and now all he gained are forgotten memories. [signs]
May: Don't feel so bad. Look at it this way, he did it to himself.
Quin: Now, that everything is over, it's time for me to answer questions, isn't it?
May: Ding Ding Ding!
Man: So, you really said that?
Quin: Say what?
Man: As long as we have each other in our hearts, that's enough! I love that line.
Quin: I meant questions envolving this case, you doo doo heads.
May: We know enough about it, now we are interested in what happened with you and Fei!
Quin: It'll forever be a secret to you noisy heads, ha ha! And now, I would like to take this time to understand and care more for my two buds.
May: I think I'll go to the bathroom now.
Man: I'll be right behind you. [Both got up]
Quin: Over my dead body you guys are. Stand still and don't move. [they did so] Always have to use the hard way. Com'on sit down. [They both sat down on the sofa.]
Man: Ok, what do you want to know?
Quin: I see something in you.
Man: What now?
Quin: That line seems special to you. Do you have a story to tell?
Man: No, nothing, nada!
Quin: Let me guess, someone said it to you, or you said it to someone?
May [looked into her eyes]: Is it Chi San?
Quin: She said it not me!
Man: No, what makes you think that. He loves you now.
May: No, Man. It's ok. Truthly, I don't think he loves me, or that I love him. Somehow I don't feel bad or anything. I thought it over, I think I have to tell Chi San something.
Tin and Marianne: Quin and Fei's problems are solved now. On the outside, they play friends but in the inside, who knows how they feel! Now, what's the matter with Chin Chin? She's alittle strange. Man still has feeling for Chi San, we can all see. Now, what is it that May wants to tell Chi San? Stay tune....
P.S. Is everyone satisified with the ending for Lun? I know some wanted him dead but think of it, does he truely deserves it? And to those who asked for my(Tin) ICQ #, it's:40466056.
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